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"Feeling Empty"

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 2:18 pm


“Feeling Empty”
By Sarah aka Vampire Girl
September 3, 2010


My glass of life isn’t complete
But it’s not empty either
When I wake up from a dream
Where I feel fully complete
A world where he holds me in his arms
Filling me with nothing but love
Then I wake up feeling unusually empty
My dreams only stay dreams
I close my eyes and I live in a perfect world
My wishes only stay wishes
I have wished on a shining star for most of my life
If they were to come true I’d have him
But I don’t so they are only as they appear to be
I always create situations in my head
And they don’t become reality
It’s depressing to dream in an unfair universe
When your dreams are candy sweet


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:29 pm


great poem. i related to it all at one point in time....i might still but i'm not sure. eaither way i love it

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 3:37 pm


thanks smile
PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 11:47 pm


I like it. I'm feeling this way currently. It made my tears jerk up a little, but I forced them back down. smile

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