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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:44 pm


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Username: Colonel Gabrielle
Character Name: Tao Kurokawa
Age: Appearing age is about 24. Actual age is unknown.
Gender: Female
Race: European


Height: 185 cm
Weight: 60 kg
Eye Color: The one under the eyepatch is purple. The other is dark gray.
Hair Color Black
Hair Style: Simple, length to waist.
Markings/Tattoos: A flame tattoo on her right ankle's right side.


Personality: A little shy, helpful, doesn't open up easily.
History: She grew up in a very bad part of Rukongai, where killing and hurting people was part of their everyday lives. However, she was really cheerful and carefree, and one day a jealous friend of hers tried to cut out her purple eye. She woke up to the noise and managed to escape just in time. That was when she decided to hide it from everyone with an eyepatch. She heard of the Shinigami Academy, and gave it a try, hoping to become strong enough to defend herself.

Likes: Birds, light music, accompany, wind.
Dislikes: Too cold temperature, mess, ants, noise.
Other: She only opens up to those who she finds herself close to. She usually keeps silent when somebody asks of her eyepatch, and only tells it people she really trusts, like some of the captains.

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Division: 1st
Rank: 3rd Seat


Zanpaku-tô Name: Dark Sparkle
Description and/or Appearance: An average zanpakutou with golden guard and black hilt.
Zanpaku-tô Spirit: A very vain, high and mighty woman. She is sometimes very nice to Tao, but most of the time she is pretentious and strict. Picture above.



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Shikai 1: Dark Sparkle of the Day
Shikai Release Incantation: Shine above!

Shikai Description: The sword uses fire as element.

Shikai Ability:
Persistent Dark Sparkle - From the tip of the sword fire shoots out in a long range, being able to hold out for several minutes.
Dance of Fire Balls - She draws a circle around her body with her zanpakutou, and after it appear little fire balls. She can control them with her mind, one or more at a time, being able to increase their speed with hand or sword movements. The fireballs disappear after about 10 minutes, depending on her energy and reiatsu level.

Shikai 2: Dark Sparkle of Night
Shikai Release Incantation: The sword uses dark fire as element.

Shikai Description: The blade of the sword turns pitch black.

Shikai Ability:
Protector Fire - A very strong shield made out of black fire. It is like a half-body-sized patch. Able to hold back a head on attack of a strong vice-captain in the beginning, later gets stronger.

Seal of the Darkness - She draws an X in the air with her sword, creating black flames in the form of the X, and they are shot out at the enemy. It can hold them down.


Bankai: NOT YET OBTAINED.

PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:03 pm


ok lets see here.......

please state how long the fireballs last in your shikai

also reword or remove the desperate screams of the dying because that can be considered god moding

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 8:22 am


Alright, edited.
I also edited the tattoo one, it is now a flame tattoo, instead of a violin.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 1:44 pm


well the desperate darkness isn't any better >.>

let me explain why

it says engulf the enemies in burning, black fire.

to me that sounds autohitting. like how does the attack work? If i knew that then it would be better and we can work from there

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 2:46 pm


Umm well how to explain it. If the enemy is powerful enough (which is really not all that hard since this character is only 3rd Seat), can break out of its seal. It's pretty much like as if it would be a big fireball that stays on the enemy. It is just colored black. Also, it is called desperate because in the darkness people usually get desperate. I guess. I mean I would. I do. So basically, it's only for the awesomely sounding epic name, but I can write some lame stuff instead of that if that's what is good.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:15 pm


well see here is the thing. I dont like things that are guaranteed to hit the opponent....... can you think of something else?

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:52 am


"guaranteed to hit people"?
You can easily jump away from it, I guess.
But sure, I'll edit it, no prob, sorry to be an inconvenience redface
Please give me some time with it, I'm not all that good with coming up with stuff, but I'll think of something ;3
PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:46 pm


well it looks good to me......

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:25 am


OMG YAY THANKS!

By the way, if she is going to obtain bankai later, am I supposed to write here her bankai first, and write out "NOT YET OBTAINED" or is it fine after she got it?

Will this topic be moved or something?
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