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 Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 6:30 pm
xxxxxx"The volume of the white noise erupting from the evil black device was almost too much to bear. Samantha balled her hand into a fist and nearly destroyed her alarm clock. She had it programmed to play Taylor Swift’s “Love Story,” a song she hated, but heard daily. The one thing she hated most about that song was that it was played so frequently she knew every lyric by heart. Every time she heard her alarm start, she’d be lazy until the singing began. She would not let herself be subdued into singing that horrid death tune. Smelling her natural odors, Sam decided it was far pass the option of a shower; at this point it was mandatory.
xxxxxxxRushing through her routine, Samantha couldn’t help but absolutely loath this time of the year. The tormenting would resume along with every other yearly tradition; the “dating” that people did was just to make themselves look cool, the bullying that the district knew nothing of, the drugs, the parties that Sam would never be invited to, and, most of all, watching her life-long crush from the sideline knowing that there’s no way she’ll ever have anything close to a chance with him.
xxxxxxxThe aggravating blare of the school bus horn was muffled through the glass windows of the house. Sam ran out to the bus, the one she needed to get to school on, the one that was half way down the street. Her feet hit hard and fast as she bearly caught up with the bus. Lucky for Sam, she befriended the driver when she was in preschool. The bus slowly came to a halt and opened its doors. Taking her seat behind the driver, Sam avoided all communication with everyone. She let out a sigh and waited patiently to come to Amanda’s stop. The two girls were close to inseparable. Bullying was practically a daily occurrence until Amanda joined Sam’s bus that happened to be stop three blocks away from the stop Amanda was supposed to use... and this was to help reduce the amount of B.S Sam received."
Is this worth pursuing? ^^ Advice/feedback would be much appreciated. heart
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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 6:36 pm
that was wonderful! please please write more!!!
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:17 pm
Well, this is good indeed!
Why don't you continue? 3nodding
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