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-Basic Info-
Name: Ryuu
Aliases/Nicknames: Ry, Hazerdas wind
Age: 13
Birthplace: soul society
Species: shinigami
Squad: Academy
Appearance:
History: Ryuu is the first son that kikio and shincho had. Not to long after he was born His mother kikio disappeared leaving Ryuu’s father in a very depressed state. Ryuu helped her only sister take care of SHincho through his depletion. Eventually Kikio came back to the family. But the happy family didn’t stay like that for long. Ryuu started to notice that his sister kyoko was acting strange. Then came the day that she murdered Sincho their father. Ryuu was devastated. But His anger over took his depression. He had a short fight with his sister. It ended with his memory being erased by kyoko’s boyfriend. Soon atfer his memory was eraed of the details of his fathers deat he wandered around trying to remember what he had forgotten but to no avail. So the 10 year old boy decided it best to follow in his fathers foot steps and take a 'leave of absence' for a few years.
Personality: Ryuu is very quiet and shy but don’t be fooled. Inside that head of his is the brain of a genius. He can be very observant and cunning when need be. But he just wants to be more like his dad.
Likes:
~books
~chess
~butterflys
~air
~sleeping
~violence

Dislikes:
-blood
-bieng told what to do
-bieng beaten
-death
-bieng alone

Sexual Orientation: Bisexual

Reiatsu Color: red

-Zanpakutou Info-

Zanpakutou Name: Merlina -means black bird.

Zanpakutou Spirit Description: A human girl with large black wings that spread out to about 20 feet long. The human girl has white hair and purple eyes. Her name is Merlina meanig black bird. She doesn't talk to Ryuu very much but despite the lack of comunication she is always there for Ryuu and vice versa. Merlina also loves to manafest herself so she can walk around in physical form with her partner.

Zonpakutou: The sword is small and silver. The hilt of the sword is a bluish color. It has jagged edges on the sharp side of the blade.

Shikai: The zanpaktou in it’s shikai state is just small silver blade with a golden koiguchi, fuchi, and tsuka. But the cap of the sword is pure black. There is a sapphire stone on both side of the guard. There are two red ruby’s going vertically. In the middle of all four of these stone are three small green stones. OH as soon as the sword is released a huge gust of wind blows through the area.


Shikai skills/technique:
Scatter shot: he thrusts his sword in the air and spins it around makeing the metal feathers scatter around him in a circle. It can only reach 10 feet away from where he stands.
quick draw: Spinning the sword like a helecopter blade over his head, ryuu controls feathers comming off the blade to shoot forward at a quick speed, and can reach about 25 feet away from him.

Kido:
Bakudo
1. Sai ~Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
4. Hainawa ~An energy rope entangles the target's arms.
8. Seki ~Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.
9. Geki~ Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them.Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
9. Hōrin ~Causes an orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns to erupt from the users hand and attempt to trap a target. the end of it remains in the hands of the user allowing them to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. The Kidō is able to connect with another one of itself if both have captured a target and bind them together.
Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!"
Hado
1. Shō~ Pushes the target away from the caster.
4. Byakurai ~The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
11. Tsuzuri Raiden ~Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.
31. Shakkahō ~ Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"


Extra Skills: Flash step (x2) Able to move at unbelievebly fast speeds but when he uses this skill more than twice his Spiritual pressure is harder to controll hus making his attacks more sloppy.

Extra Weapon(s) or Items: A sacred dagger and the shadow sword that used to belong to his dad.

([TRANSLATION AS REQUESTED!! ])

{{ 'Cool RPC dude! A few changes and you will be fine. First up, change your profile layout to the one Red made, located here.

Next, post your major attack, and your minor attack. I think your major attack is wind, and your minor attack is wind, am I correct?

I like your Shikai, but lets break it up into smaller parts so its easier for others to read. Also its eliminates the possibility of making your person BOSS, and unbeatable, no bullshit like that haha.

I like the way your Shikai is going, but the way you have it your feathers are unbeatable. Heres my idea to help fix that:

Spinning the sword like a helecopter blade over his head, ryuu controls feathers comming off the blade to shoot forward at a quick speed, and can reach about 25 feet away from him. This attack is hard to do often, so it can only happen once every 3 posts.

Feathers scatter in the wind: thrusts his sword into the air, this time spinning it over his head like a top. Razor sharp feathers come off the blade and swoop towards the ground making a wall like thing of razor feathers. This attack is hard to do often, so he can only do it one time every 5 posts }}

([Get it better? =P ])

(( a way with words i do not....lol))

profile skeleton stil relevant? ?.? or did we change the profile format again..... (just asking in case i need to redo mine) also very slight edit to a few small things,

so is it to late to jion this thread