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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:43 pm


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Basic Info:
Username:Kage Shinoha
Character Name:Kuro Ryuu Shi
Nickname(s):Shadow Dragon
Age:30
Gender:male
Sexuality:straight

Appearance Info:
Height:6'0
Hair Color:silver
Hair Length:medium about to his upper back
Eye Color:silver
Skintone:tan
Scars/Marks/Tattoos:he has burn scars on both his arms

In Depth Info
Nation:Fire
Rank: General
Bender:Firebending
Bending Level:Low Master
Weapon of Choice:Jian Sword
Profession/Job:General

Background Info
Likes: the Fire Nation, his rank, firebending
Dislikes: water tribe, air nomads, earth benders
Hates: water tribe
Loves: the Fire nation
Greatest Fear:death
Darkest Secret: Kuro killed his parents.
Family: none
Origin of Birth: Ember Island, Fire Empire
Biography:Kuro was born on Ember Island. Once he became old enough his parents started to send him to school. The schools were usually year round. He only saw his parents on holidays. When he turned sixteen Kuro's parents died. He was sent to live with his Uncle. Knowing that Kuro hated the schools his Uncle sent him to schools close by that he could come home everyday. When he turned twenty Kuro joined the Fire Army. It was there that he learned to hate the other Empires. After ten years, the day after he turned thirty Kuro became a General. He now leads with an "Iron Fist". He doesn't let anyone slack off. If you fail at something he will yell at you until you get it right.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:47 pm


Put your bending level to Low-Master, because nobody starts out High-Master.

Your rank will go up but training and how much you post.

XD

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:49 pm


I believe Kage must have at least 5 lines in his biography, am I correct?
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:51 pm


Rakiaya Tressorea
I believe Kage must have at least 5 lines in his biography, am I correct?

Yes.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:52 pm


LINES I thought it said sentences...
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:53 pm


Sorry, it was sentences. But still, you have only 4. Not to mention the "sentences" we want are much more longer than that.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:55 pm


Hey I don't do 1st person. It's hard for me to rp as my character, I don't even read books that are in 1st person.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:58 pm


You don't have to RP as first-person. In fact, you're discouraged to. Just write your biography as first-person. If you can't, try third-person and we'll see how that goes.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:59 pm


Kage Shinoha
Hey I don't do 1st person. It's hard for me to rp as my character, I don't even read books that are in 1st person.

Then do it whatever, make it more detailed with a good background.

Now you have to make a 7 sentence biography. That isn't even allot, 5 sentences is a paragraph.

SO DO IT ! xd
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:08 pm


How's that.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:09 pm


Kage Shinoha
How's that.

If you want to do 5 or 7, its your choice.

Biography isn't hard for a bad-a** character, if he is.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:09 pm


Not bad. I approve of this profile. Sickjeremiah, your opinion?

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:10 pm


I wish there was more details about when he entered the Fire Nation, but its good.

YAY, someone that hates other empires or Nations.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:13 pm


That's no different then Pein and Hirako who hate the Fire Nation... but had to add that. Well, considering that the hatred between the nations is still fresh, it makes sense to have a racist general.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:14 pm


um he was born in the Fire Empire.
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