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 Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:35 pm
_____________________[│║║█║▌][Personal & General Character Data] Xemus
Full Name: Xemus Nickname: Jerevinan, Mosue Alias: Ominus Valens, Unsaid Height: 6ft Weight: 150 lbs Body Build: Average, Toned Race: Nobody Age: 40 Birthdate: 9/7 Eye Colour: glowing, crystalline blue Hair Colour: blood red Homeworld: uknown Personality: Enigmatic, Reclusive Biography: A mysterious man indeed, Xemus had spent most of his newborn life travelling the universe in search of answers to his existence. Eventually he discovered what it was that caused his existence. The death of his human self Mosue. He had died protecting his homeworld from a horde of dark creatures named heartless. Yet with all the strength of his former self’s heart he perished along with his world. He was not helped by his fellow man who cowered in their homes, or by the so called keybladers dubbed the heros of light. The forces of light had forsaken him and the evils took away all that was precious to him. Upon learning this Xemus had an epiphany as he remembered those events and what it was like, to feel. And the strongest of what he felt was hatred, hatred for those who had forsaken him and hatred for the dark beings that cursed him with his meaningless existence. He vowed revenge, to those that cursed him to this fate, to the warriors of light...The realms, the worlds.... He planned to end them all in due time and inflict the horrors he had endured in his human life until there was nothing left at all... _____________________[│║║█║▌][Battle & Weapon Character Data] Primary Weapon Type: Greatsword
Primary Weapon Description: Choschechtzel (Ko*shekt*zel), A menacing greatsword with a demonic asthetic that stands taller than its wielder. Its temperment is unknown but it originated in betwixt time and space constantly destroying the space around it causing constant destruction within the solitudinous dimension from which it was confined, its as if it was sealed there by some higher power...
Primary Weapon Range: 2 meters
Primary Weapon Abilities: Choschechzel, draws its power from destruction itself. This weapon has the power to permanently sever the flow of energy between space and time within a given space as well as any organic or inorganic beings energy coming in contact with its blade when swung. Basically, this blade has the power to destroy matter and energy, a power that defies science. This however is a moderately slow process and does not occur instantly, it also has no effect on keyblades for some uknown reason. In battle this blade has two primary uses, both stemming from its destructive capabilities. The first, destruction of matter works similarly to a sap spell in addition to damage caused by the swords blow; but instead of a person or things regular constitution being permanently drained, its maximum health capacity is drained slowly as the destructive energy breaks down the matter itself into nothingness. This can only be undone by defeating the wielder of Choschechzel in battle. The second use, the destruction of energy, primarily can be used defensively. Energy itself, such as magic for example can be reduced to nothing. When the destructive power is primarily used against energy Choschechzel gains the ability to cut through the energy itself or emit a pulse of destructive energy with the effect of eliminating the energy. For example in video game terms based off of kh. Xemes is wielding choshechzel in battle and was fighting a keyblader. The keyblader, not knowing xemus's strength or weaknesses attacks with magic first. He casts a Thundaga spell by quickly raising his keyblade in the air. Xemus would in response to the keyblader raising his keyhblade assume magic would have been cast. Countering Xemus would slash upwards in a wide 2 meter arc just in time to cleave a large bolt of lightning in two. The bolt would crash into the ground on either sides of Xemus leaving him unharmed. Seeing this tactic fail the keyblader would resort to melee combat and rushes forward to strike. Just for time sake i say Xemus slashes the keyblader before he reaches him. The keybladers max hp bar would suddenly spark and deteriorate while at the same time he recieved massive hp damage from being slashed.If the blades power were fully awakened through his ability the keybladers hp bar would have been lopped off in accordance to the damage caused by the blow and would stay lopped off for the rest of the battle. This means healing never fills health back to where it used to be since the max hp itself has been reduced. In an rp the regular blades power works by causing the person affected to slow disappear starting from the infected area and get physically weaker; while at full power a part of you dissappears permanently depending on where hit. if more clarification is needed u can pm me or ooc since explainations take way too long xD
Special Accessories Type: chaos feather
Special Accessories Description: Special trinkets that protect the wearer from the destructive forces of Choschechzel.
Special Accessories Enhancements: none
Skill Type: Voco Arbiter
Skill Description: The power to call forth upon the power of a judge of the realms. Allows the caster to call forth the Arbiter of light, Lucia. The Arbiter of Darkness, Calig, or when either are defeated, the arbiter of chaos Intor To summon an arbiter one must offer up all his strength temporarily and not interfere in the ensuing battle. Each arbiter has no special ability other than complete manipulative abilities over their elements. Chaos would simply be a draining energy that repels magic. All arbiters may be harmed in combat the same way any rper could. They obey their own sense of sentience which is known by no other than themselves but their actions are usually based on their elemental affiliation. Each arbiter can be played as a rp character with the sole ability of energy maniuplation of their element(which is basically any variety of attacks that involve their element) and mastery of their weaponry in melee combat.
Ability Type: Suscitatio
Ability Description: Xemus uses his natural power of destruction to awaken the true power of Choschechzel increasing its powers of destroying matter and energy from moderately slow to instantaneous. This usually causes things to be sucked into the blades wake. This is caused by the atmosphere being destroyed and the remaining air around it rushing in to fill the place that is empty this results in a torrent of atmosphere rushing towards the blade with speeds greater than tornados. Due to this many objects may be caught in the turbulent wind and sucked towards their doom. When this ability is active Xemus can cause permanent damage equivalent to the strength of his melee attacks. This results in no regular constitution damage but constant permanent max health damage. This move is activated only temporarily as it affects its user as well due to lack of oxygen. Theme Music: Unsaid Battle Theme music: Cease to Exist!
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:38 pm
I could use some help in posting pics department...So for now i have links. Im open to changing what i need to to make this legal but heres what i got xd
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Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 7:07 pm
I'm going to need you to elaborate on these abilities more. Like how will you behave the arbiters? Can they be harmed? How does your powers of destruction effect other people?
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 4:31 pm
I added more description the behavior of the arbiters how they can be harmed and how Xemus's powers affect others. If theres anything else anyone wants me to change just let me know, thnx 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:53 pm
Okay it seems good but a little too powerful. Let's say his destruction ability works only up to -ra level spells (Fira, Blizzara, etc.) with moderate difficultly. Meaning it wouldn't be too easy a feat. -Aga spells are the best of the best, cleaving them in two would be a bit much. The arbiters are fine as long as you don't go overboard. But I feel that you should limit yourself to one summon per battle for fairness.
Fix all those things and you are approved.
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:51 pm
Thanx blaugh ill be sure to keep those in mind.
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