well i would say completly redo the shikai and bankai because it sound god modish to me.Or at least reword it.
this makes no sense and is god moding because it is not specific and could be absolute. (Plus the non moving thing is really god moding i mean if you cant move you cant kill)
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It loves blood so it can kill the enemy if Agito is blind, deaf, or even if he can't move.
remove this i will not allow this power in the guild. It is god moding
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The blade is very powerful and can even adsorb kido and oppenent's zanpakuto's powers. It also lits itself on fire to burn the enemy away
i would completly redo this........ exploding flaming dragons?
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With one swing it makes the gravity level heavier and 1000 exploding flaming dragons attacks the enemies.
once you fix your zanpakuto abilities post again so i can look over it
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