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Faiths Only Hope

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:55 pm


A breath is breathed
A curb is walked
A voice is heard
A dream is dreamt
A heart falls to love
A night is slept
A day goes on
A promise is broken
A marriage is split
A child grows
A bird sings
A mother cries
A baby is born
A day always goes on


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 7:05 pm


Wish this was like facebook so I could 'like' this.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:32 pm


It's beautiful. Simply beautiful.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 12:58 pm


I love it. It's simple and graceful. Well done *applause*

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:03 pm


Thanks you guys! I appreciate the sincerity.
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