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 Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:50 am
i tried my hand at making another flash profile, this time I'm just messing with movement, please critique: tell me what you like and don't like Wouldn't it be nice.....
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:17 pm
soften the edge of the picture you put over the clouds (or stretch it), the border of it much to obvious. Also, there is a typo: "wouldn't be nice it we were older" I think you meant "Wouldn't it be nice if we were older" :\
Other than that, nice theme.
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:29 pm
I think its nice :3
It looks so retro, all I think is maybe the saturation, pixel look in the middleish needs to soften out a bit.
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 3:05 pm
Makes me think of Fallout. But I'm dorky like that. =w=
I would not make the cloud float up so high. It's a bit too dramatic and keeps the eye on it for too long.
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 11:35 am
@speedy:
your right about the picture,but stretching it would've of disorted the picture and i softening it got complicated and messy (blur didn't work, smudge made it look fuddy, maybe a filter?) and i had alot more typos than that XD, hehe mistake..
@truth:
thanks ;D, again my feeble attempt at merging the background with the pic, or giving it maybe a diffused glow i guess
@Agorphie:
haha,
yeah.. i was trying to figure out some kind of movement for the clouds that made sense, i had the other cloud moving also but it was too busy. it was going left to right before but i noticed you can see it go off the profile which looked bad.
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