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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 8:15 pm

http://i34.tinypic.com/xdurrb.jpg <- original

edit: here's after some critique from Senti http://i33.tinypic.com/ojfdbo.jpg

edit2: After further critique

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I'm working on this for a contest and I want it to be gooooood because I would like to place so I can get more exposure on my DA and be able to actually get RL commissions and sell prints and such.

So I really need critique.

Yeah I know my sketches are way dark and erasing will be a b***h. xD
Also ignore the eraser bits, I rushed this into the scanner without brushing the eraser bits off. xD;;;

Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:37 pm

i am not turned on

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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:28 pm

Zhaff

i am not turned on

The one time you're actually allowed to be and you're not.
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:32 pm

B: Hmmmm....I suggest evening out the ear. It seems the ear part's a teeny bit too small and the lobe part's kinda fat instead of being just a tad long.

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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:39 pm

She has stretched ears. xD

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Like so.

Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:40 pm

D8 Oh......I have failed you.

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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:47 pm

Nahh you just didn't know. D:

Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:34 pm

I thiiiiiink... and don't listen to me if you don't wanna, because god knows I'm not a great artist, but I think the knee that is crossed over the bottom one is a little too far up the thigh. Like, it should be closer to the knee it's crossing. 'Cause I don't think I've ever seen someone cross their legs that far up their thigh, but I could be wrong!

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Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:49 pm

Sydneeeey

I thiiiiiink... and don't listen to me if you don't wanna, because god knows I'm not a great artist, but I think the knee that is crossed over the bottom one is a little too far up the thigh. Like, it should be closer to the knee it's crossing. 'Cause I don't think I've ever seen someone cross their legs that far up their thigh, but I could be wrong!

You're right actually. I just crossed my legs to check and it's not possible to comfortably cross them that high.
I'm going to shorten the thigh of the bottom leg and bring the knee and calf closer to the knee of the upper leg.
Thanks for that. heart

Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:42 am

I just realized that the foot resting at the bottom of the chair is backwards. D:

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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:18 am

Senti-du-Bon

I just realized that the foot resting at the bottom of the chair is backwards. D:

I realized that too yesterday while I was showing it to a friend in the hospital. XD

Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:47 am

Nurse Kiri

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I just realized that the foot resting at the bottom of the chair is backwards. D:

I realized that too yesterday while I was showing it to a friend in the hospital. XD

Ok you win.

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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:19 am

It was really funny
I was like 'Yeah I fixed it up a bit after a friend critiqued it for me but this foot still looks weird to me' and he was staring at it for a while and he was like "I think the foot is backwards."
and I was like "Holy s**t she has two left feet."
xDDD

Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:16 pm

Haha, no probs! Good to know that sometimes I am helpful x3;;

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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:36 pm

i feel like the feet/legs are kindof disproportionate...
edit:
just read previous posts..I KNEW SOMETHING WAS OFF!!

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