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 Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:45 pm
Yeah, if you find something that seems a might off, let me know i'm working on my anatomy. 
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 8:50 am
Something about Noir's left arm looks off. Even in that pose I imagine being able to see his arm a bit.
Pretty hot btw
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:04 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:46 pm
Noir's left leg is a stump, and so is sin's right leg. And noir needs to have some of his left arm peeking out from under sin's arm.
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:54 pm
noir's neck connecting to his head looks a lil weird.
and sin's shoulder is a lil like, idk. caved in? idk
either way i always figured you were joking when you said you were gay LOL.
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Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:02 pm
Hmm...thanks for the constructive crtitisim guys, keep them coming. and EMO LOL
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:49 pm
Mofo, this is amazing heart
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:59 am
Your right shoulder shouldn't be in front of Noir's, it looks weird (or maybe his shouldn't be encaved in your clavicle/shoulder muscle). Noir's upper arms look like they are different lengths. As muscular as Noir seems to be, I would think you could see more of his right calf, even if he does have it wrapped around your leg.
p.s. I love the theme heart
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:27 pm
Well if you really want critisism...
1. You did no research on the rules of Noir's face. I'm not Rorschach.
2. How come you can be a demon but My face has to be a mask?
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:09 am
Classic Noir Well if you really want critisism... 1. You did no research on the rules of Noir's face. I'm not Rorschach. 2. How come you can be a demon but My face has to be a mask? this is not cristism, this is whinning. pardon me, I was under the impression that you we're trying to be like Roarscach
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:28 am
Basically everything everyone else said. xd
You shoulda make his mask a butterfly. >=[ [/joke]
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