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Nerd_of_Many_Faces
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:11 pm


I'm a pretty big fanfic fan, especially Harry Potter fanfic. I recently stared workin on a fanfic using mine and Daughter of Merlin's roleplay charaters (she doesn't mind, btw). I plan to post it on harrypotterfanfiction.com It starts out telling Anastassiya's story and her intro to the wizard world. Then I'm going to write some sort of story with her, which I haven't brainstormed yet. During thet story, you'll get glimpses of whats going on in Raina's story. During this I'll also write Raina's story and post it. I have the main plot for that. I wanted to share my prologue with you guys. Please comment!

Prologue

They crept down the long, dirt, Kazak road in the middle of rolling hills. There were 7 of them, all clad in black, silent material so they wouldn’t be sensed in the dead of night. They kept constant vigilance as went about the side of the road looking for babies abandoned by their poor mothers. One of them stumbled upon a newborn with fair skin. Without a sound, she picked her up and continued to walk.
~*~

The Augsburg Orphanage was abuzz with 13 Kazak newborns, left to die, being tended to. In the far right corner, three nurses where franticly trying to care for a five day old girl. Death was breathing down her neck. A nurse by the name Annamarie Eruherdiriel had tears in her eyes as her and her co-workers washed and immunized the baby. After they did all they could, they left Annamarie to kept watch over her.

She stayed all night watching the baby’s chest rise and fall slowly, a little too slow. She stroked her head, covered in little wisps of auburn hair.

“You will live, you will get better and you will survive.” She whispered.

At that moment, the baby stopped breathing. A single tear fell on her head.

“Dear God, please take this soul to you and welcome her to heaven. Amen.”

But God had different plans. At that moment, life gasped out of the baby. She let out a small whimper and opened her eyes.

Annamarie clutched her to her chest. “I think I’ll call you Anastassiya, resurrection.”
~*~


Eleven years after her recovery, Anastassiya has come to reside with Annamarie and her husband, Hans’ house with their two other girls, Raina Sway and Heidi. This is how she lived since she was a week and a half old.

There was a ‘bang' at the window of the room where Ana and Raina overlooked a computer screen. At the sound, they jumped and looked at the window.

There sat an owl with a white head and neck and a black bottom that met in the middle like flames. It had a letter in its beak.

Raina jumped to the window and opened it. Before it was entirely open, the owl dropped the letter in and flew off.

At that same moment, the doorbell rang. Ana ran out of the room while Raina picked up the letter and followed. At the door was their mysterious neighbor, Wilhelm.

“Ah, so I see received the letter.” He noted after they invited him in. “I’ll need to speak with your parents to, um, explain some things to them. You better join us, as well."

Still quite in shock, they went to find their parents.

The whole household, with the exception of Heidi, gathered in the living room and stared at Wilhelm.

“Well, first,” he started, “You’d better open that letter.”

Raina raised the letter. “It’s for you, Ana.”

Ana took it out of her hands and opened it. “Dear Miss Eruherdiriel, we are please to inform you that you have been accepted into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry…..”

“Care to explain, Wilhelm?” her father questioned.

“You see, Ana, you’re a witch.”

At this, her father jumped up. “You cannot come in here and call my daughter a witch!”

“No, no, sir. This isn’t an insult at all. Your daughter has magic……” And with that, he began to explain the wizarding world to a group of wide-eyed, blonde Germans and their adopted, auburn Kazak.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 8:04 pm


I think it's very well written smile

X_Valentine_Lovegood_X
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Nerd_of_Many_Faces
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:47 am


Thanks! I finally figured out what I'm going to do. That is the prologue to Anastassiya's story, I'm working on chapter one of her story, I already typed the first chapter of Raina Sway's story and then I'm going to write a shorter story of their summer with the focus on their little sister, Heidi.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:20 pm


Interesting. Seems like you've really thought out the story.
You know, I've always wondered that if Muggleborns got a Hogwarts acceptance letter- what if they thought it was some kind of joke? And if they don't, how do they know how to get to Diagon Alley?

X_Valentine_Lovegood_X
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Nerd_of_Many_Faces
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:20 pm


That's why I put Wilhelm, the neighbor, in. It just makes sense to have some one their to explain it all, or else you have muggles getting into Diagon Alley without every knowing it's there or having them forget about the whole thing, which doesn't really make a good story. But then, how do they even know who's muggle-born wizards and witches?
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:16 pm


Very true. I really wonder how Hermione figured everything out. She never mentions it.

With Lily there was Snape to tell her everything, so what about other muggle-borns who don't have witches/ wizards in their neighborhood/ area to tell them what to do?

X_Valentine_Lovegood_X
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Nerd_of_Many_Faces
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:20 am


I guess that's what JKR wants us to find out. Makes for good fanfic.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:19 pm


Yeah it does, but I'll bet she already has it all figured out in her mind (because she's a mad genius!).

X_Valentine_Lovegood_X
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