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 Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:48 am
My poem. i hope you like it it's more of a free verse i kinda did on the spot
He sits across from me.
He stares in my eyes longingly.
Brown, and a little bit of green, swirl together to make a perfect color of comfort.
His lips curve up in a crooked smile.
The smile I fell in love.
The smile that always kept me coming back.
The smile, attached to the lips, attached to the beautiful face, connected to the magnificent body of the one i love.
When will he come back?
When will my waiting be over?
Soon, thats all I know for sure.
The answer to all of these questions, the small voice in my head always whispering in my ear "Soon, love, soon."
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:13 am
this great for making it up on the spot. my best poems are from just clicking noe topic and just start writing. great job.
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 12:43 pm
Decent poem, my best ones come from me writing many at once. My best ones tend to be last but there have been exceptions.
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Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:33 pm
I write my best poems at random times... like when it's really late at night or when I have a verse stuck in my head.
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 7:59 pm
I usually write the best late at night too. It's like a lightbulb flickers to life when the sun goes down. And I'm up all night just scribbling in a notebook.
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