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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 2:47 am
╔══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ══╗ In the present, past, and future, I'll be completely devoted to you. But this isn't really me You're an angel not asking who I am You understand That is not really you You look at me as if I'm something more Well dream on ╚══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ══╝Amoria...
If it rained in Amoria, then it was rarer than a rain in a hot desert. Not that, the sun shined too much, it just didn’t rain too much. But now, the night arrived, overpowering the Amorian sun. The darkness of the night ... it brought dreams to some, but some were awake at night. Vampires... They hunt in the night, but not this foursome. Oh no, during the day they lived among people like normal humans, but during the night they hunt and drank blood like vampires they were...-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-~~~~~~-Hey, since that sisters of faith didn't work I decided to post another fictional story of mine. This is called vampires night, which kinda is a mix up of twilight and vampire knight. Kinda. I wrote it first in my own language, but then got bored and translated it to english. Then I thought, heck I could post it on Gaia. Anyway, this is a supernatural/romance/adventure story about a girl called Alice who gets "kissed" by a vampire. Please comment, cause I want to hear some criticism. smile
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 2:53 am
╔══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ══╗ Chapter 1..._______________
Everything has a beginning...
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Young Alice was walking alone, even though she wasn’t suppose to. She had forgotten her cross at home. But her friend, Amanda, had just died of blood poisoning. A vampire had bitten her. Funeral lasted longer than they usually and now she was forced to walk home alone at night. Suddenly she heard a loud sound that made her fear. She noticed that someone was following her, but the only thing she saw was a shadow. Alice began to walk faster, but so did her follower. Alice knew that on this very street, Amanda was bitten, which she had died a few days later. Now Alice began to run, but her follower ran faster than her. "Oh no, it's a vampire!" Alice thought in her mind, while she tried to out run her follower. "What will I do now?! I don’t want to die..!"
Suddenly, Alice tripped over loose stone and she fell on the ground. Alice glanced back and saw that her follower had disappeared. But just in case, Alice got up and walked to a nearby alley. She ran through the alley, but at the same time her fear came back again when she saw her follower in front of her. This guy was wearing a black hoodie and red shirt underneath it. Black jeans and a black hat, which was deeply in front of his face. Only red marks on his face and his smug smirk were showing. Under his lip was a clear white vampire tooth. His short dark brown hair danced with the wind along Alice’s chocolate brown hair. Vampire’s hands were in his pockets, and he began to walk towards Alice. "Stay away from me!" Alice yelled, but then felt a light touch on her hand and lips. Vampire had put one finger on her lips, that’s when she went silent. "Shhh ..." Vampire hushed. Alice saw that under the hat were blood red eyes. "Don’t scream or do you want follow that girl who died recently?" The vampire grinned. Alice was so scared that she closed her eyes and couldn’t resist the vampire’s voice. The vampire drew Alice closer to him and leaned close to her neck. He sniffed her neck and was enchanted from the fragrance. Scent was so enchanting, that he was forced to lick his lips. Alice, trembling in fear, grabbed the vampire's shirt. "Please..." Alice whimpered in the vampires grip. "...Don’t do this to me." "Don’t worry, this won’t hurt... "He whispered seductively to Alice’s ear."...Much." Alice gasped when the vampire sank his teeth to her neck. She screamed into the night from pain, but then she fell into the vampires arms powerless. When the vampire stopped, three more appeared close to him. "Another one?" One said. "You can’t stop that thirst of yours." Another said sarcastically. "Shut up, you two," The last said, as if he was gang leader. "Take her and get out of here, the sun will rise soon." "Yes, Derek" The vampire said and looked at the unconscious Alice.
Next morning, Alice opened her eyes and found herself in her room and in her own bed. "Was it just a dream?" She asked herself, until she felt a strong pain on her neck. she took a mirror from her desk and looked at herself. "A kiss?!" She gasped. "That guy then bit me and left a kiss!" Yes, she had the vampire's "kiss" on her neck. People called the Vampires bite as a kiss, since the vampire, irrespective of its sex; the victim was always powerless to the bite. Now it was only a matter of time, was Alice sentenced to death like her friend Amanda or should she become a vampire..?
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:03 am
╔══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ═══ ══╗ Chapter 2..._______________
The Rolake family...
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Alice was on her way to Orbis high school, where she attended on a daily basis. Her neck did still hurt, but she didn’t want anyone to see the kiss on her neck. She was forced to tie a scarf to her neck, so that no body would notice. Once in school, one of the girls of her class, Sandra, came to her holding a biology book on her hand. Alice wrapped her scarf tighter to her neck as Sandra, even though she was Alice's friend, was a terrible gossip. If Sandra would find out that she had been bitten by a vampire, it would be the end off her. "Alice, I was looking for you." The red-haired Sandra said. "Oh, did you have something to tell me?" Alice asked. "Silly, have you already forgotten that two siblings from the famous Rolake family are attending in our school?" Sandra asked with a giggle. "I think I did forget about that." Alice lied while looking to a different direction. How could she forget about that? The Rolake family was always in her mind.
The Rolake family... Derek Rolake, 25 years, the oldest sibling and head of the family, because their parents had died in a fire when they lived in Valencia. Casandra Rolake, 23 years, the second oldest. Rumour told that Casandra Rolake was so popular among both girls and boys. As soon as the whole school had heard that Thomas and Kinka Rolake were starting in their school, everybody went nuts. Kinka and Thomas, 17 years, were the same age and everyone thought that they were twins, although there were no similarities between them. Kinka spoke Japanese like language, and she called her brother Thomas-kun. Thomas was popular with the girls, because of his self-righteous smirk like smile melted everyone’s hearts of all at once. Boys in the other hand were only concerned about Thomas’s athletic skills. He was a great athlete, who looked dominant in at least 50 different types of sports. There were also a few championships.
"Oh, there he is!" Sandra exclaimed, and pointed to that 17-year-old boy, who carried his backpack on his one shoulder. Alice's eyes widened when she looked at that boy. Thomas Rolake, alive and kicking. His dark eyes were visible just below his cap. Alice knew how her legs didn’t obey her at all. She heard how some school girls sighed when they saw Thomas. Thomas how ever didn’t even look at them. Alice opened her locker and then took a chemistry book. Then she closed the locker door and started to walk towards the chemistry class. "Oi, Kinka..." Thomas called to his sister. "Hai, Thomas-kun." Kinka responded very quickly to his brother from behind him. "Something in your mind?" "Yeah, isn’t she the..?" Thomas began, but Kinka slammed his head with her biology book, when his cap fell to the ground. "AUH! What was that for? "He shouted. "Wait till I tell Derek." Kinka distressed and ran down the aisle to the biology class. "Damn Kinka... I'll show her..." Thomas muttered and grabbed his cap from the ground. He put it back to his head in front of his eyes and began to walk towards the chemistry class.
As Thomas entered the class, he saw that Alice was in the same chemistry class with him. He sat down to the back of class and looked at Alice. There was something about her. But what was it? Alice tried to study, but somehow she couldn’t concentrate. She had a strong headache and she couldn’t breathe well. "Mr. Hart?" Alice said. "Can I go to nurse?" "May I ask why, Alice?" Mr. Hart said, but he didn’t get a answer, when Alice suddenly fell from her seat, and lost her consciousness in the process. "Mr. Hart, let me take Alice to see a doctor!" Thomas yelled as his doubts about Alice began to wake up. "Good heavens please do Thomas." Mr. Hart said. Thomas rose from his seat and walked over to Alice. He picked Alice up from the cold floor to his back and walked out of the class in a hurry. Once at the school yard, he looked around and quickly walked to his motorcycle. Thomas usually came to school with his motorcycle, while Kinka came on foot. Although the Rolake premises were 20 km away, Kinka always came on foot. Thomas placed Alice to sit down in front of himself, while he sat down behind her. He initiated his bike and started to drive towards his brother's clinic.
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