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Muse_of_the_Soul Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:44 pm
 "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 From now on, any time an OC of mine is used in a fanfic, I require that:
Permission be given ahead of time, via PM, and
A preview of the chapter before its posting, which will be followed by approval/disapproval.
This is only to keep characters in-character, as these took time to make. 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think."
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:45 pm
What about for the main fic? ;/
I don't want to have to send you a PM, and a preview, and wait for approval/denial every chapter that your OC is in.
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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Muse_of_the_Soul Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:47 pm
Incubus Shane What about for the main fic? ;/ I don't want to have to send you a PM, and a preview, and wait for approval/denial every chapter that your OC is in. "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 Yes, even for the main fic. And it's not only for Haru. It's for Sin, Haru, and any other non-listed character created by me.
This is so my characters actually stay 'My characters'. 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think."
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:53 pm
I don't want to ruin it, though. Can I just ask for permission, and tell you if I think I'm making him even a little OOC? x-x
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:56 pm
Could you send a small excerpt, with just the part that has his character in it?
I always feel a little odd using other people's OC's, so I understand Haru's request a little.
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:57 pm
Yeah. That's why my chaps USUALLY avoid other OC's talking like the plague. Because I always do it so wrong. XD
And I just KNOW that I did Sin wrong. xD
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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Muse_of_the_Soul Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:00 pm
Incubus Shane Yeah. That's why my chaps USUALLY avoid other OC's talking like the plague. Because I always do it so wrong. XD And I just KNOW that I did Sin wrong. xD "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 *shoots* -.-
Sin is in Haru's body. How'd he magically manifest himself outside of Haru, and get sent hundreds of miles away? 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think."
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:02 pm
Muse_of_the_Soul Incubus Shane Yeah. That's why my chaps USUALLY avoid other OC's talking like the plague. Because I always do it so wrong. XD And I just KNOW that I did Sin wrong. xD "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 *shoots* -.-
Sin is in Haru's body. How'd he magically manifest himself outside of Haru, and get sent hundreds of miles away? 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think." This was when Haru was still dead, and before Sin sacrificed himself to bring him back, or whatever. Ask Mira. @@
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:06 pm
Yeah, but Shane, I told you this. Sin and Phoenix do NOT exist in the material, feymarch, or any other world at this moment.
So Haru has a point, Sin wouldn't be there. I actually had to suspend belief to fit them into the chappie where you had them fighting against Cosmos.
So why did you include him again?
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:06 pm
Incubus Shane Muse_of_the_Soul Incubus Shane Yeah. That's why my chaps USUALLY avoid other OC's talking like the plague. Because I always do it so wrong. XD And I just KNOW that I did Sin wrong. xD "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 *shoots* -.-
Sin is in Haru's body. How'd he magically manifest himself outside of Haru, and get sent hundreds of miles away? 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think." This was when Haru was still dead, and before Sin sacrificed himself to bring him back, or whatever. Ask Mira. @@ "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 -.- Here's an idea.
Next time do me a favor and crossreference with me to see if it's possible for that to happen. It wasn't.
Plus, his personality was way off. 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think."
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:08 pm
Haru, remember, I sent the part that Sin was in to you like, over a month ago. And you said it was fine. I didn't change it at all. :/
@Mira: I don't remember, now. D:
I think it was to see them off. I accidentally deleted the part where he left again. : /
Also, you said my side was behind a day or so at the time, yes? ><
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:13 pm
Incubus Shane Haru, remember, I sent the part that Sin was in to you like, over a month ago. And you said it was fine. I didn't change it at all. :/ @Mira: I don't remember, now. D: I think it was to see them off. I accidentally deleted the part where he left again. : / Also, you said my side was behind a day or so at the time, yes? >< "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 I never got any message. :1 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think."
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:15 pm
I said that because you had screwed up the continuity, and that was all I could think of to salvage it. From the chapter before THAT one, Quote: Mira was standing at the desk, trying to piece together the fragments of the red gem, “Phoenix sacrificed herself,” she breathed, “I can’t hear her anymore.” Haru stood, and his fingers brushed against the bone mask hanging from his belt, looking down he stared at it. Sin’s face was cracked. It was then he realized that he couldn’t hear the dark voice that had haunted him for so long either. And from my latest chappie, right before your last one... Quote: “You and Mira are staying here then,” Neji nodded in understanding, “And you had something to do with her revival I’m guessing.” Haru nodded, “Well… not so much me as Sin and Phoenix. I’m not sure the details, but they got us both out of that place,” his eyes saddened for a moment, “At a pretty high sacrifice to themselves.” When in doubt, reread the chappies. It really helps to avoid these types of problems.
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:16 pm
Muse_of_the_Soul Incubus Shane Haru, remember, I sent the part that Sin was in to you like, over a month ago. And you said it was fine. I didn't change it at all. :/ @Mira: I don't remember, now. D: I think it was to see them off. I accidentally deleted the part where he left again. : / Also, you said my side was behind a day or so at the time, yes? >< "Carpe diem! Rejoice while you are alive; enjoy the day; live life to the fullest; 『 I never got any message. :1 』 Make the most of what you have. It is later than you think." It was long ago. I even have it saved in my mailbox, but it's to myself, to save it. And it was right after you said yes to it. I'll take a screeny of it being in my mailbox, though I can't do yours. I have about 10000 PMs after that one. @@
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:25 pm
 This doesn't prove much, but notice the date. I just ask for you to trust that you DID say 'sure,' or whatever. And something about how Sin wasn't an Eskimo. @@
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