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Ryuu Shimizu-Squad 7 Lieutenant

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:03 am


Username: Ryuu-ninja of the mist

Name: Ryuu Shimizu

Nickname: Dragon of the mist

Social Class: Middle-lower class

age: 18

Birth date: 12 24 1991

Eye color: Brown

Hair color: Dark Blue

Height: 5'9"

Weight: 161

Marks: Family crest on left sholder, alchimist mark on right forearm. Scar on left eye

Appearance: User Image

Personal information-

Favorite Color: Blue

Favorite food: General Tso chiken

Hobbies: Playing chess, writing

Pet peeves: Cracking nuckles

Personality type: Moderately intellegent, generally moody, always serious

Strengths: Cares for others

weaknesses: SweetTart squeeze...O_o!!

Soft spot: Little puppies and Kittens

Darkest Secrete: Wants to be a Vizard, and regin down destruction on the Soul Society

Biggest temptation: None

Background information- As a boy, he always got into fights. Most of the fights were defending his friends or showing that he was top dog. He usually lost, but gained respect everytime he got back up, ignoring the pain. His father, Minato, who was originally captin of Squad 8 many years ago, taught Ryuu the basics of Kendo and hoped that one day he would join the Gotei 13 and be a respectful captain. But, Ryuu didnt want to be Captain at all, which lead to his darkest secret: being a Vizard was all he could think of. He heard storys of a subsitute soul reaper-Ichigo Kurosaki-from his father, who taimed the power of a hollow within him and saved the soul society many times over.

Name of parents: Minato Shimizu (Father) Shizune Shimizu (Mother)

Number of siblings: Zero

Names of siblings:

Type of childhood: can't remember much of it. Must have been good, then.

Most important childhood memory: A girl he once spoke to-and kissed-for a day. He's been unable to find her for a long time.

Background: Ever since Ryuu joined the Soul acadamy, he's heard of how great squad seven was many years ago. He trained hard to be noticed by that only squad. He prayed for the day that he was chosen for a squad.


Shinigami battle information-

Squad: Squad 7

Rank: Lieutenant

On a scale of 1-10 how good are you at Kido: 5
On a scale of 1-10 how good are you at hand to hand: 10

On a scale of 1-10 how good are you your zanpakuto: 8

Zanpakuto name: Akuma

Sealed appearance: Dark blue blade, green sheath

Shikai release phrase: Grind to death, Akuma

Shikai appearance: Regular Zanpakto

Shikai ability: On impact, giant ice shards erupt from the ground.

Bankai release phrase: akuma no himitsu

Bankai appearance: transforms into a segmented blade with a pick-like protrusion on each segment; ice blade

Bankai ability: Shards of ice erupt from the blade when spun in the air for defense. On offense, rips to sherd any blade and humans
PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:13 am


Some people might not know what a Corpral is. Dumb it down a bit. And the shikai appearance, makes little to know sense and the ability isnt detailed enough.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:43 pm


Eros is right, please do what he said, adding on to that though.

you need to fill out the personalty type and the weaknesses, also your background could use just a little more detail, it's not bad, just a little more. if you fix that and do what Eros said then it'll be good
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:46 am


Okay. I'll work on that. Check it out now and tell me what I might need to work a bit more.

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X_Kurosaki Isshin_X
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:32 am


okay you still need the personality type and the weaknesses. everything you put in "background information-" nothing goes there, put all of that under background please. for rank, what are you? vice captain? 3rd seat? 4th seat? 5th seat? ect or unseated officer?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:40 pm


To be honest, I dont know which one is higher or vacent.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:04 pm


There is a squad roster somewhere around here it has all available squads and positions listed out. That should help clear up any confusion.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:27 pm


7th squad is open, you can be captain if you wish.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:17 pm


Actually I'm the new captain of that squad, however I wouldn't mind working alongside you, you could be my vie-captain
PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:00 pm


Aston Hale The Nomad
Actually I'm the new captain of that squad, however I wouldn't mind working alongside you, you could be my vie-captain

Uh, I think you mean "Lieutenant", but, yeah; I can live with that.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:03 pm


Lieutenant, Vice-captain, and Fukutaichou are all the same thing, just so you know
PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:06 pm


However vie-captain isn't. I makes a typo OH NO xd

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