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 Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:48 am
Ok, so I have this story I'm working on and I pretty much have it down but I'm a little confused on which way I want it to go. Could anyone help? I have these two characters Marianna and Danny, and Marianna is a ghost. Danny is a ghost but has no memory of his human life. My problem is I have two ideas, if you don't mind please tell me which one is better and why. Thank you in advance.
Idea 1: Marianna knew Danny when he was a human and has an idea on what he was like as a human. she secretly had a crush on him but he never real saw her but he did know someone was there, I.e he heard giggles and voices.
Idea 2: Marianna doesn't know that Danny was a human. She helps him find out about his past. And they both like each other and always think the same thing. But their relationship isn't confirmed just implied.
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:49 pm
I think the first one is much more solid. She could try to fool him into thinking he was his dead girlfriend he was in love with, or various other things like that. Just make sure Marianna never tells the whole story, and it'll be fantastic. wink
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