okay, so I wrote this song based on a Rp site, which is based on Full Metal Alchemist. Just tell me if the lyrics are alright. xD Also, I have the MP3 file that my friend made when she performed it.

We are homunculi, sin and virtues alike...
Prido,Envy,Greedo, Lust and all of that like.
The dead brought to life, no matter the cost
Gluttony,Wrath, Sloth, Despair.
All immortal but dead all the time
Vaingory, Acedia, Extravagence.
They all are the spawn of man trying to be strong
Chastity,Temperance, all men were wrong
They failed and they all lost something of them
Diligence, Patience, and Humility
Each is a symbol, a sign of their loss
Life created from life that was long lost
Kindness, Generosity
All borne by two people, ruled by their word
Father, mother, the source of them all
Among them, some stand, fight, rebel or ignore
None can resist the soon-coming war
a war to engulf them and destroy them all
sooner or later the weak will all fall
The homunculi will be
no more

xD and the lyrics were changed slightly by Jalon (the wonderful singer of my little song) so these are just the originals. please tell me how I could improve making lyrics. xD