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 Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 12:13 pm
Some things fall into place,
But things don't seem to matter.
I just stay in this empty space,
But it doesn't make me any better.
Falling in love over and over again,
Makes me feel like I'm desperate.
Hopefully this will come to an end,
For it is unfortunate.
Power isn't what I want,
It's not what I need.
It's what I thought,
But now I bleed.
Crying from what you said,
Replaying, over and over in my head.
You have lied,
Now think of all the times I've cried,
But still standing by your side,
fighting through the highest tide,
though I faded and died.
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:51 pm
wow... thats intense and really deep! great job... i just got chills! awesome job!
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:54 pm
Yeah I was really amazed of myself for writing something like this. Also this is one of my better poems.
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:58 pm
I surprise myself sometimes too... well im sure that all ur poems are fabulous
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Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:34 am
I'll go ahead and post more!
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