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ToushirouLover_8701

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 12:03 pm


(This is one of my better ones)

I'm always wondering now,
If I made you fall down,
Because everytime I turn around,
I don't hear a sound.

I know I'm here,
But you won't see a tear,
Bleeding from my eyes tonight,
I see a clear red light.

Scratching, biting, taking all,
Tonight, i won't ever fall,
But only to fall asleep.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:49 pm


thats really good, i like it!

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ToushirouLover_8701

PostPosted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:51 pm


Thank you very much! biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:54 pm


ur welcome

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