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Skikyo Kinzoku
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PostPosted: Sun May 30, 2010 11:50 pm


Hello everyone this is Mist with the Guild News.

We would like for everyone that hasn't posted in the welcome thread to do so, so we can get to know you all better. it isn't required but would be nice.

We have a new Contest look to the contest thread for the rules and details.


Till next time this is Mist signing off
 
PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:10 pm


Val's Last ability cost too much.
her last ability needs to say she is still a planeswalker or it would make no sense.
Her second ability should say "onto the battlefield" instead of in to play.
her first ability should say "Creatures you control..." for a worthy effect, no specific creature type
You forgot periods after sentences.
Picture could be moved up more.
Awesome idea would be her second ability she puts soliders into play that have battlecry.
Her last ability should not giver her haste or lifelink. Instead give her first strike.

it would then be a cool card

Not bein pushy, just tryin to help.

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Skikyo Kinzoku
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:45 pm


Thanks for the advice

The reason her last ability cost so much is because she becomes a creature with a pretty good amount of effects and stops being a planeswalker, because if she didn't stop being a planeswalker once she became a creature unless she was raised up to 11 loyalty counters or higher she would come in and die since she would have 0 loyalty counters thats why after you use her -10 ability she stops being a planeswalker.
I should change it so that it says she losses all of her current abilities first then becomes the angel so that people try saying she can still pump up your soldiers and also increase your soldier count.

Also this is the wrong forum to be commenting on the card i made it has been posted in the Create-a-card section of the Guild along with other cards i have created.
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