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Not sure if your all aware but I am working on becoming a Rapper. These are just some verses I wrote. This isn't my best work but it's decent ones. I just decided to spread my verses and s**t. No negative comments please. I just want constructive criticism. Or feedback. Either way works.

1. Spittin with true rhymes.
Spittin from the heart.
I like to see myself as a true lyricist because I write from the heart.
These days all rappers are fake.
I rap because it helps me stay.
You rap because you think it isn't gay.
I rap just to one day get some money and live chill.
All these others talk about how their so ill.
I want to create a new world in this rap game.
All rap about these days is girls and getting stoned all day.
Thats not how I want it to play.
I know I can't change this world.
But I can do one thing.
Make a new world so people can heal and grow from the muzik.
No more pain...

2. Ain't exactly unique.
No clever rhymes.
I only speak the truth.
That's my moment to shine.
I have a unique sound that no one will ever master.
I plaster every basterd that try to capture.
Put him inside a brick cage, no answer.
Make sure he dies because I am the master.
These fools always testing me.
Saying I got a dry flow.
I take the hate and turn it into self sympathy.
If you try to mess with me I destroy you like people killing bumblebees.
I rap to keep myself major.
Page me if you want to acknowledge that muzik is my savior.

UPDATE!: This a new verse I wrote recently, enjoy!

3. I spit rhymes, but I don't kill guys.
I always kill these haters lyrically in my own time.
I always take time to write my rhymes.
And these haters are just stuck within the 'fake rap' time-line.
I feel like it's my duty to get them out.
Even though their purpose is to take me down.
But hating just gives me more motivation to prove them wrong.
But they still take time everyday to just say I suck.
But they haven't seen the best of me.
I'm still in my normal mood, not on a killing spree.
These haters always try to get the best of me.
Too bad they'll never see the other side of me.
But that side hopefully is something no one will ever see.

Cool verses! I like them, just continue.

lol I totally forgot about this topic I put here. But thanks guys! I already plan on going on with this career so...yea. Thanks! biggrin

i take back my reply. There gr8 =]

Haha thank you. That was what I was aiming for.