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 Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 2:35 pm
portrait of Ante. man white hair is haaarrrddd.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 4:58 pm
it seems like
his hair needs to be bigger or something
or like
his eyes need to be lower or something idk
the horns look a bit weird cause they're.. not as detailed as the other things in this drawing
also the lips look weird to me
and the neck is less defined then usual
like..
it looks like there would be an adam's apple there
but there isn't
i usually don't draw adam's apple and neck definition at all when i draw
but in this, it looks like the neck needs something
you know?
i don't really know either.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 5:06 pm
☆ Welllll I'm biased so... heart heart heart
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 6:55 pm
Nose seems a little pointy downward (more than usual, but not horrible)
I also think the left eye (from our view) is funny, like it looks fine it just seems off.... or maybe where the cheek meets the face is weird idk.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 6:56 pm
Frelly it seems like his hair needs to be bigger or something or like his eyes need to be lower or something idk the horns look a bit weird cause they're.. not as detailed as the other things in this drawing also the lips look weird to me and the neck is less defined then usual like.. it looks like there would be an adam's apple there but there isn't i usually don't draw adam's apple and neck definition at all when i draw but in this, it looks like the neck needs something you know? i don't really know either.
@dasi
ofc you would be xD
@isa
thanks xDD
i actually messed with the face position so many times that i can't tell what looks right anymore lol.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 7:19 pm
If you need portraiture practice don't hesitate to use my avatar dramallama
I'll pay you fo reals
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 7:24 pm
The eyes seem... awkwardly placed. Or something like that.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 7:28 pm
Eyes a little far up
Hair a bit flat
neck seems a bit thick, imo.
Love the skin shading
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 9:21 pm
Amish Astronaut Eyes a little far up Hair a bit flat neck seems a bit thick, imo.Love the skin shading Its not too thick, I think its just too straight. the line just under his chin should be curved a bit, I think.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 10:02 pm
everything under the chin looks flat and unfinished, but maybe you haven't worked in details there yet? I agree with the previous posts about the neck needing more structure, but I think the fabric collar thing around his neck needs some dimension as well.
the left eye is just a lot smaller than the one on the right. it doesn't match with the depth or the plane of the nose.
the top little branch of the left antler looks weird too, but that may be just because antlers are ******** weird and hard to show without them looking like little tiny early 2000's Mexican gang vehicle flames.
lol
this is why I never go to studio critiques high, btw. I am way too wordy. xD
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 4:00 pm
Solanum Jesus Amish Astronaut Eyes a little far up Hair a bit flat neck seems a bit thick, imo.Love the skin shading Its not too thick, I think its just too straight. the line just under his chin should be curved a bit, I think. That's what I meant, I just didn't word the way I should have; my b
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 4:19 pm
Yeah I think the neck needs a little more shape
and his right eye looks a little strange.
And the nose looks pretty disproportionate. Like really fat at the top and it gets really tiny at his nostrils. o 3o
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 10:58 am
The eye on our left is small, like half the size; yet it's not that far away. Maybe the eyes are simply too far apart. The black horns look like they are floating, just above the head, instead of being part of the head. Love the eye color.
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 11:22 am
Yeah, the horns need more definition.
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