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Once Again Another Improvement!

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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 6:37 pm

I know alot of you (or all) are tired of seeing my pathatic drawings...but I'm improving!!! Here are my latest drawings! Enjoy!(or not if you're already sick of it)

Kat The Bullet Dodger
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Truama

Puritty

Willing Love
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Sweet February 4th
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Still Strong
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sorry they're so big...I didn't have time to shrink-ify them XD User Image

Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 10:19 am

Thank you for posting ^.^ But I must point out that from now on, if you are going to make threads, make sure they are in the right place. I am moving this thread to the Critics Booth. Also, if you want people to give you tips, post 1 or 2 pictures at a time so they can really evaluate your style and give you the best advice. Too many pictures makes it very intimidating to give you tips because they don't know where to start.

I will probably be giving you pros and cons at a later date. Good Job though and thank you againfor posting ^.^

<3 Ava Amore

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OH DESIRE
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:53 am

.. but Ava, you never said the pros or cons, and its later. o;
They're all awesome, by the way!
Can't really critic or whatever, since I really don't know what you're drawings lack, but.. > < ;; They're super good. I really like the detail in the last one. You're definitely improving!

Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:27 pm

I don't quite remember you last pictures, but from what I do I see improvement in your overall drawing smile
Hrmm, I'd have to say your strong point would be your face/hair [your "sweet February 4th is a good example], however your body proportions are askew. Not to be rude, but the character in "truama" [sic] has an overly large head, skiiiiny body frame and teeny hands. Your details are great, I must say, however my suggestion is to take a look at people and observe proportions and try to make your drawings more, well, proportionate.
These are simply critiques, so sorry if I may come off as a little harsh; but overall your artwork is improving; keep it up!

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