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 Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 11:56 am
1) don't kill everything and everyone all at once unless you have a really good reason
2) don't curse like a sailor
3) make it...some what realistic like dont get caught in a haze of bullets and come out unscathed everyone gets hurt!
ENJOY!!!
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 2:01 pm
"YEHAW!!!!"Haze yelled as he riding on the back of a giant bull like beast soared over a hill and crashed to the ground. Haze snickered and lepted off the beast and landed gracefully on his feet infront of the beast he got into his fighting stance then the bull charged and so did he, he slamed his foot onto the bulls head and jumped into the air then unleashed a fury of lightning fast punches and kicks the beast reared back screeching in pain it toppled over he jumped high into the sky through the clouds he went up then all at once came down and one second before helanded on the beast's chest he brought his foot down slaming his heel into the beast's chest stunning it for a moment long enough for Haze to whip out his twin katana's and thrust them into the beast's head killing it
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 6:05 pm
"well well look a little rabbit"demon said staring at Haze
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 2:43 pm
Haze's ears perked up and flicked torwards Demon's voice Haze jumped to the ground and seathed his blades
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 2:55 pm
Panda walked over to a bamboo tree.She looked around and picked some off and put a stick in her mouth,pulling her panda hat down more. "nom,nom,nom." she said walking chewing. She walked past them without even looking a them.
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 3:05 pm
Haze got distracted by the girl and looked at her then the airship landed infront of him and severl people rushed out and surrounded him "Haze are you all right?" or "mission complete lets get back to base"where what they said everytime he finished off a monster
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 3:11 pm
She turned her head to look at him and the others. Her eyes widned as she bit down and spit the bamboo stick out. "owch!! Splinter!" she pulled it out and sucked on her tougne to try and get the blood to stop.
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 3:17 pm
Haze looked at her he took a step torwards her befroe he was pickedc up and slung over a massive shoulder. Max was a big body guard 10 times haze's size "oh no you don't back to HQ" he said in his booming voice. then started walking back onto the airship
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 3:26 pm
"Wonderful." she said walking away. She felt something wet rolling down from her mouth and touched it, blood. She broke into a run to a shop. She walked through the doors as a old man said,"Panda, I thought I told you to stop chewing on them bamboo sticks." "Sorry pops." she said and stuck her tougne out. "Just prees on it to make it stop" he said and went into the back room. "Mkay." she said and walked out again.
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 11:35 am
demon watched"to many to take down damn"he said and moved away before anyone else noticed him
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 1:31 pm
Once they where back at HQ and Haze was doon with his daily physical exams he went to him room and closed the door his room was white with a small window at the back the bed was built into the wall so when you have a nightmare and automatically sit up when you wake from it you can slam your head into the cieling above you bed how nice of them! Haze walked over to the window and pulled up a chair with no arms on it he sat backwards in it towahere the back of the chair was facing the same direction as he was he folded his arms and set them on the top of the chairs arching back then laid his head on his arms and stared out the window
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 1:34 pm
Panda went to play with the little kids down the street. They chased her around the park. Panda screamed sarcasticly while flailing her arms while running. The little girl grabbed her leg and made her fall. They both started to laugh.
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 1:47 pm
As the HQ {which actually is a really big airship} Flew over the city Haze saw that chick from before playing with the little kids and haveing fun, his ears drooped and he lowered his head to where you couldn't see the bottum half of his face he looked at them with sad eyes longing to be normal like them instead of being cooped up all the live long day
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 1:51 pm
they started to pull her hair."Pan-pan, what are these?" she asked pulling on Panda's panda ears. "What?" "These black things on your head." "I don't know." the ears disappered and they pulled her hair again."Ow ow ow."
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 1:57 pm
Suddenly the door burst open and a fancy looking man walked in "come on you have a job to do"he said then lead Haze out Haze and a bunch of soldiers gathered into a smaller airship and dicented into the city they landed not evan 20 feet from panda and the children the slodiers where the first to come storming out but Haze was held back as a secret weapon if anything went bad with the capture of Panda, who was the evo they located
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