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heres a snippit of a book i might write! Tell me if it sounds like it relates to something.


"Bang!" Adora froze as she store right into Tanner's eyes, then down at her mother, well, Old mother, "She was going to Eat you Adora," Tanner told her setting the gun down. A tear ran down her cheek. she took a few stumbles back until she fell onto her couch, "Why," she said, now sobbing into her hands. Tanner slowly came and sat down beside her. He put his hand on her shoulder catching her attention, "She loved you, she would have wanted this rather than hurting you," he smiled kindly to her. she looked up at him, sniffled and smiled back. He helped her stand up, "Here, lets go back to the convoy." On the way out the door, he grabbed her bag, the thing that she needed. The thing that caused this mess.
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She looked out the window, catching the attention of the driver. "Its ok honey, We are all here for you," Melissa said softly and sweetly, after all, Adora was only 18. Melissa was the eldest of the women in the small convoy, and she wouldnt let them forget that she was the girl in charge. melissa looked at her little sister, "Rachel, would you mind handing me the map," she said, a bit sterner to her sister. Rachel hurridly passed her the map. "Thank you, now go back and load the guns with Tanner." Melissa opened the map quickly and clumsily, trying to not let go of the wheel, "Adora, where do you think there will be gas," Adora looked at the hordes of dreadfulls ahead, "Umm, we could try great falls..." she muttered. She looked back at Tanner and rachel, she smiled as Tanner gave the good old, reassuring 'I agree' nod that he has. She slowly and stiffly joined Tanner and rachel. She sat down beside them and began to help. Tanner looked up at her and smiled, "How are you doing Adora?" She smiled, "Fine thank you," RAchel looked at at the two, rolling her eyes at the two lovebirds, then her attention turned to her elder sisters direction, "Where the hell have you been?!" Melissa giggled into the walky talky. "Great Falls, they are loaded with gas, barley any dreadfulls," THe walky talkie said back. "Good thing your boyfriend, Conner's okay Melissa!" tanner teased. Melissa turned around and sternly said, "He is not my boyfriend!" The whole back burst out laughing, they all could even hear Conner's convoy in the background of the walky talky laughing their azzes off. "Why did I ever pick up you two experiments?" Melissa asked herself. She then went back to the talkie, "Sorry about that, Tanner pulled a Wise crack... well, Adora and Tanner got another correct prediction on gas... that makes seventy five rights, no wrongs" Adora then blanked out. Tanner looked at her, and was startled at her falling, but calmed down almost imediatly, he was used to this, it even happened to him, came with their 'powers', or so they were called. "Hey Melissa, I think we're getting another prediction," Rachel said to her sister. She grabbed Adoras hand and dropped it letting it flop to the ground. "And she's out, I think it's something big..."

Agreed. It sounds to be quite the interesting story. I'm sure you'll do great at writing stories. I can't wait to hear more ideas . ^-^

Amazing story Iris, amazing ,I was captivated from start to end, you are a natural born writer! Use Gods gift wisely my friend! XD lol

We'd love to see it when you write it Taia. =)

Cool. We'd love to see it. biggrin

Okay, well I posted some of it on a blog, but that was a long time ago, and I edited it alot. So I hope you like this version
Story

I know. I edited it awhile ago, so the gypsy thing is gone. And the beginning is different now. Once I find my usb, I'll post the newly edited version n.n

yep n.n