Welcome to Gaia! ::

The Shin Megami Tensei/Atlus Guild

Back to Guilds

For fans of the Shin Megami Tensei series, or any other game made by Atlus. It is open to all gaians who love these games, we'll have polls, 

Tags: Atlus, Shin Megami Tensei, Persona, Video Game, Role Play 

Reply Artists Area
Persona FanFiction Goto Page: 1 2 [>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 12:40 pm


Hey there, I just wanna tell you guys that I'm planning on writing my own Persona story and see if you guys can help me think of anything like for instance:

/_Name_/
Place
School
Dorm
Shadow's area (like tartarus)
etc.

/_Plot_/
How it all began
What's the story behind the shadows
Should I throw in a tiny bit of the previous persona's (1,2,3,4)?
Shall I include some cannon characters as special guests?
etc.

/_Characters_/
If you want you can also make a character and include them, but like the game, only one arcana each person.(if you wanna know the profile layout, I can give it to you when I have the chance)

Its fine if you use a persona from the games or make your own.


I'll update it when I've thought of anything else.
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 12:41 pm


Arcana's that's been taken
Temperance
Empress
Fortune
Tower

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 12:41 pm


Current Progress


[Monday, May 10, 2010]

After a series of chatting with a Persona fangirl, I've come to narrow down a couple of things.

I'm going to officially include my two OC's:
Agaki Souhu, and Shiyori Fushigina

After coming back from Iwatodai dorms, he'd realize it'd be lonely if he lived by himself so he's decide to start a dorm using the money his parents left for him. Shiyori would be the first student moving into the dorms. Soon after it's Remi, then Dae.

Daedalus Tavi and Remilia Susumu are my friends OC's

We've also come up with a feature, like how the map is? How the hell do they see a map in the game? So I thought in Persona , they'd receive a Shadow tracker in their cellphones, a special feature that Agaki would install.

[Monday, May 11, 2010]

Persona 5 revolves around three questions:
1) Why do shadows exist?
2) Why do they attack humans?
3) Where is their "source"?


This is Agaki's reason to make use of Persona's again

Their first encounter was with a mob of shadows in human forms (when they attack, they show their true forms) under the full moon, defeating them with Shiyori. After that, he decides to gather Persona Users into the dorm and to find answers to his questions.

Just like in Persona 3, the shadows become active during the full moon.

The shadows knew how strong of a threat Agaki is, and so they've attempted to kill him in collage, disguising as his colleague. They made their advance, but it was in vain. Since then Agaki knew about their new capabilities, and created a tracker, but sadly it only works in the shadow's relm. So he then has Kos-Mos create a barrier that would block out outsides unless they were given permission to enter by a dorm resident.

Current Dorm Residents:
Agaki Souhu
Shiyori Fushigina
Daedalus Tavi
Remilia Suzumu


o Collage is named Genka University
o Cellphones that are owned by dorm residents are modified with the "Shadow Tracker"
o The Year is 2012

[Monday, May 12, 2010]

o Dorm is Toshima Dorm
o Central Shopping District (like in P4 since we can't think of anything else)
o Shadow relm's entrance is "Door To Darkness"
o New Evokers are officially cellphones.*

"Door to Darkness" is an experiment gone wrong. It was created when Agaki was doing a chemistry project, a shadow (Agaki studies the behaviors of shadows inside his lab) startled him, making him spill an unknown type of mixed chemical onto a shadow that was inside a metal cage. It resulted in a huge explosion, knocking him unconscious as he flew back. The door to the experiment room then turned into the "Door to Darkness"

*Cellphones pick up their brain waves and texts "Persona" onto a blank black screen and automatically summons them. It isn't a new feature that Agaki has installed, nor has he ever thought of it. It was discovered when Shiyori moves in during the shadow attack. Agaki then takes Shiyori's phone and studies it, finally cracking the code. But he prefers using his Evoker instead.

[Monday, May 16, 2010]


How Shadow's do what they do:
For Shadows to trap their preys that they've chosed upon themselves, they have them live through a past in which they'd wish to return to. The prey will be open at that moment, and that's when the Shadows will strike, killing their prey. They'd recieve their memories, and traits. Allowing them to be a perfect replica of the victim

For shadows to kill the prey while they're at that trance, they would disguise themselves as that person's most precious person in the memory, or for an exception, they'd become the victim's past self.
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 12:42 pm


Current Skits


"Ne~ You didn't open a dorm to attract girls did you?"

"Wh-what?! No! Geez! I just happened to recieve girls right from the start! Don't scare me like that!"

-------------------------------------------------------------


"Souhu-senpai, are you sure you aren't dating Dae~?"

He'd blush, "WHERE'D YOU GET THAT STUPID IDEA?!"

"..I'm going to my room now." all the while blushing as well

-------------------------------------------------------------

"Um... Senpai? Shiyori-san's a girl."

"...What're you talking about?" he asked, cocking his head to the side.

"Didn't you realize it? S-Shiyori is known for being mistaken for a girl~" Dae pointed out to him with a chuckle.

"W-what?! B-But the voice! The figure!" He'd notice the curve and pause. "...." goes to corner and drowns in dispair as he fell to his hands and knees. "I...I really AM running a girls dorm..."

Daedalus walks up to him and pats his back with a small smile. "There, there Senpai... I'm sure it'll work out~!"

He'd drown deeper into dispair as a stream of tear runs, "T-that doesn't help but thanks..."

-------------------------------------------------------------


"You kids and your new whatchamahooit's"

"Dude, you sound like an old man."

"Judging by our age diffrence I'd say I am!" he then smirks and pulled out his Evoker. "And, you KNOW our Evokers are cooler!"

"Y-You know, I never really preferred shooting myself in the head with a gun..." Dae would speak.

"Well, at least there's more excitement than crumpling up a piece of PAPER." Remi added.

Shiyori would keep silent as she watches them argue on what's cooler.

-------------------------------------------------------------


"Welcom-G-Guys?!"

"Wah~ Dae-chan can cook now?" Agaki would smile, "That's fantastic!"

She'd blush. "I-I was trying to keep this a secret!"

Remi would laugh. "That explains why you're not home til' late at night."

"You know? In the past Dae-chan would cut herself with a knife by accident, even if she wasn't cooking."

"Are you serious?!" Remi would laugh.

Dae would stay silent while fighting the urge to slap Agaki from embarassment.

"It kinda makes me worried about you working in the kitchen...Are you doing alright?" he'd ask, rubbing his neck.

"I've only cut my hand once..." She'd wince, but smile. "I've been pushing myself to work harder, and not many cuts have happened lately."

Remi would smile. "Well, you have your secret safe with us!"

He'd smile also, "I'm glad that it's working out for you."


The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 12:45 pm


Profiles (part 1)


[The Inspired Artist]

Name: Agaki Souhu
Gender: Male
Personality: The type that can't stand by as another is suffering, patient, bright, kind, compassionate, modest.
Age: 21
Occupation: Second Year Collage Student
Arcana: Temperance
Clubs: Computer club
Appearance: User Image
Persona:
Kos-Mos : Beauty of the Stars User Image

Level: 47
HP/: 1249/1249
SP/: 990/990

Physical | Fire | Ice| Elec |Wind|Light|Dark
Null/Repel | -- | -- | Absorb | -- | Absorb | Weak

Skills: Full Analysis, Spell Master, Enduring Soul, Thunder Reign, Morning Star
Physical Skills: Akasha Arts
Buffs: Mind Charge
De-buffs: None
Regular attack: Pierce
Strengths: Physical
Weak: Dark


Invoker: Gun

Weapon: Gun

Back Story Summary: Agaki was once a person who lived in a wealthy life-style with his beloved parents who works for the Kirijo Corporation. At the year 1999 an accident occurred at the Corporation, causing his parents death. Around that time he joined a group called SEES as their beta member. Two years later he moved, and having to move his Invoker was given to him as a farewell gift since he had seem to have upgraded it. Agaki moved to Inaba to start a new life as he struggled to live his life as a normal student at Yasogami High till the end of his Senior year, 2002. He's attending collage as he manages a dorm.

More: Something happened to him during the time he was in SEES. A glimpse of a monster, a shadow. The only one who saw it behind a golden door. It shot a beam on his forehead causing a conflict between his will and the shadow, Nyx. Every time he remembers the past that shadow will attack him. And soon he will fall into an apathy syndrome.



personality: serious, emotionless(only to others, not to Agaki)
About Kos-mos: KOS-MOS has significant powers. She has superhuman strength and speed, her body is formed from some sort of highly advanced nanomachines that allows her to morph parts of her body (specifically her arms) into various energy projectile and melee weapons. Her body is also able to self-repair and is very durable though not indestructible, and she is also protected by a force-shield. She also possesses the ability to summon weapons such as the F-GSHOT chainguns and her famous F-SCYTHE and equipment from another location via U.M.N. transport. She also has a long-range sensory array, the D.S.S.S. system and CPU that exceeds even those possessed by Observational Realians.
She also possesses a Hilbert Effect projector whose power is thousands of times greater than that achieved by even the largest spaceships.
KOS-MOS possesses several black box components. Each of these black box features are found in each of her skeletons, version 1, version 2, version 3, and version 4. One of these is her potent X-BUSTER weapon, a powerful burst of energy beams from her abdomen that absorb the Gnosis. Others are related to her "simulated personality" OS and her self-awareness. KOS-MOS al.
KOS-MOS has another weapon system called the Tertiary Weapon System. They consist of a set of energy wings, a pair of energy cannons and other attachments meant to be fitted onto her. The wings and cannons are part of a Phase Transference Cannon. While wearing this gear she can fly at sub-light speed making it look as if she's teleporting.



Name: Shiyori Fushigina
Appearance: User Image
((at first, I made her as a character for my RP in P3 with a friend, but I decided to use her for P5 so please ignore the uniforms and evoker))
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Year: Freshman
Arcana: Empress
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Black
Height: 5'10
Weight: 120lbs
Occupation: First Year Collage Student
Resident: Toshima Dorms
Birthplace: Tokyo, Japan
Family: Fushigina, Yuri (father) and Fushigina, Julia(mother)
Blood type: B
Club: Kendo
Transportation: Motor Cycle
Race: Japanese/English
Personality: Quiet, Introverted, Protective
Likes: Her parents, animals, reading music
Hobbies: Writing stories

Appearance:
User Image

Level: 32
HP/: 1309/1309
SP/: 190/190

Physical | Fire | Ice| Elec |Wind|Light|Dark
Str | Weak | -- | -- | -- | -- | --

Skills: God's Judgement, Null Physical, Insta-heal, Unshaken Will
Physical Skills: Vorpal Blade, Heaven's Blade, Black Viper
Buffs: none
De-buffs: none
Regular attack: Cleave
Strengths: Physical
Weak: Fire
Invoker: Cellphone

Weapon: Dual Blade

Back Story Summary: (in progress)


[Magical Brie]

RP Character - Daedalus Tavi [Updated - 2010/5/11]

Name - Daedalus Tavi (度 デイダラス)
Gender - Female
Personality - Confident, Loyal, Wants to move on
Age - 16~17 (1995/12/12)
Race - Asian
Height - 5'2''
Weight - 104lbs.
Hair Color - White
Eye Color - Sandy Brown
Occupation - College Student (First Year); Cake Shop Owner
Arcana - Wheel of Fortune
Clubs - Culinary Arts Club

Appearence:
User Image

User Image
Persona - Blackbullet Harpy
Level - 32
HP/: 500/500
SP/: 569/569

|Phys. | Fire | Ice | Elec | Wind | Light | Dark
| -- | | -- | |Wk.| | -- | | Drn. | | Wk. | | Block |

Skills: Mind Charge, Wind Amp, Wind Boost
Recovery - Mediarahan, Diarahan, Samarecarm
Wind Skills - Garudyne, Magarudyne

Weapon - Element Glove

Story - A few years after several incidents in her life, Daedalus moved out of the dorm to be taken into a home by her best friend. She begins to realize that life can be lived the way she wants it to be, and she does not have to worry about suppressing a Persona or following someone's orders, but being herself. She works at a little cafe that she began after realizing her talent in cooking, but keeps it secret at the risk of being laughed at or embarassed.

Other Info - Daedalus has an interest for reading things, and is getting more accustomed to not faking her appearence or how she's supposed to act. She thinks of her friend as her family, and is known to express her determination in battle.

Persona - Blackbullet Harpy; The Leader of the Blackbullets
Personality - Cautious, Understanding
Profile - Blackbullet Harpy came from the bottom of Dae's heart after saving someone in her life. She has mostly support skills, and really only attacks when Mind Charge is used.

Other Info - She has saved Dae on the edge of death many times, and is very loyal to her Master. Daedalus has grown used to her because of this, and doesn't have any problems with her.


For her actual (old) picture made by SesshoFan of dART, click here


(was originally Remilia Konagi, but changed the last name for the Persona Story)
Name - Remilia Susumu (進む レミリア)
Age - 17~18 (1995/5/20)
Personality: Tomboy, Carefree, Strong (Mental)
Race - Asian
Height - 5'8''
Weight - 110lbs.
Hair Color - Purple
Eye Color - Red
Occupation - College Student (First Year)
Arcana - Tower
Clubs - Band

Appearence:
User Image


User Image
Persona - Mari
Level - 38
HP/: 580/580
SP/: 450/450

Physical | Fire | Ice | Elec | Wind | Light | Dark
| Block | | Wk. | | -- | | -- | | -- | | -- | | Wk. | Block |

Skills - Power Charge, Tarukaja, Matarukaja
Physical Skills - Assault Dive, Power Slash, Crazy Chain
Ice - Bufula, Mabufula


Weapon - Guitar

Story - On her way back from Inaba to her old town of Tatsumi Port Island, Remilia was attacked by some Shadows while walking home. She headed to back to her house to pack up her things to run off from her house, only to be ganged by all of them. Using her musical talent, she was able to get through by destroying them as she continued to progress to the train and evacuating towards a new city.

Other Info - Remilia normally used a sword in her battles. But, since her music seemed to rush out from her guitar as her offensive weapon, she switched to join in with the band. She hates being called by honorifics, and often corrects others to call her 'Remi.'

Persona - Mari the Demon
Personality - Progressing, Confident
Profile - Mari was first obtained on Remi's way back without her even knowing. She gives Remilia advice at times, and is known to cheer her on in battle in her heart.

Other Info - Remilia wants to earn a career in music, but before that could happen she needs to finish school. She comes to the city to share her talent across the world.
PostPosted: Tue May 11, 2010 6:21 pm


Inside Toshima Dorms
If it's too small for you to see, you'll have to wait for the weekend for me to edit it. If my handwriting's messy then... I'M SORRY!! orz m(_ _)m


User Image

V- Vending machines
W- Woman's restroom
M- Men's restroom
B- Bathroom
DTD - Door To Darkness
S- Stairs

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250
PostPosted: Tue May 11, 2010 7:21 pm


reserved
PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 7:30 am


I'm just curious but are you accepting rpers at this time? I'm like what you're doing. biggrin

BTW love your siggy. I can't wait for P3P. I'm preordering it so I can get Junpei's cap! 4laugh

Daalt256


The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250
PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 6:00 pm


I might do an RP of it if I feel like it xD, but for now, this is all a plan for my fanfiction story. If you wanna take part, I don't mind.

That's awesome, I'm pre-ordering it too~ >w<
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 4:34 pm


Just to let you know~ the RP version is open~ to post your character, post here

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250

Daalt256

PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 4:39 pm


I'm tempted to join but I have a hard enough time keeping up with the Persona X RP. I'll have to have some time to think about it. I like how its coming along too. Good work, Artist. biggrin
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 4:46 pm


Hahahah, -waves hand- it's ok

The Lost Elegy

3,650 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Member 100
  • Signature Look 250

Orpheus Aristo
Vice Captain

Familiar Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 7:06 pm


Yeah, the way this is going is much smoother than the Persona RP that I came up with.....Oh god, I'm ashamed of myself now ^^;

I might make one character for this, since i overloaded myself in PX and I might even find ways to fix my own
Reply
Artists Area

Goto Page: 1 2 [>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum
//
//

// //

Have an account? Login Now!

//
//