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Cold Kissess Chapter 2

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XxKitty_of_DeathxX
Crew

PostPosted: Tue May 04, 2010 3:18 pm


Chapter 2 open eyes
Finally one by one i opened my eyes that use to be bright green. I felt

disoriented and my head was spinning other then that i felt......powerful.

Then my memory suddenly came rushing at me like a mad dog. i was filled

with shock and fear what had he done to me. Am i alright, i looked myself

over. Everything was fine but i noticed i was pale more then i was before

. then i realized what had happened, he turned me into what he was. Then

out of know where it came to me, how could i be so stupid. After all the

books i had read how could i not notice right off the bat that he was a

vampire. He must have used some type of mind control on me, i had read

somewhere that they could do that.Then i remembered him, where was he. i

looked around and noticed my new inhancced vision. He was easily found

he was sitting by a tree with his head between his knees. I walked over

there not making a sound i was curious and strangely concerned. When i

reached him he looked up his eyes met mine and we just stared. His eyes

were filled with guilt, regret,loneliness, and oh my god a little hint of lust. my

faced softened "are you alright" i asked. he looked up and tilted his head

to the side like a confused puppy. "me alright" he answered with a odd

smirk on his face. "yes you look....upset". "well honey in a way no im not

alright. but you should be the one upset not me. and yes i am upset." "may

i ask why you are upset". "he looked at me again. then he replied"i am

upset because i feel guilty for changing you". "you shouldn't i to tell you the

truth its what i have fantasized
about

forever". Then he grinned, and answered back"well that made me feel a

little better". "but you know what would make me feel alot better" he said

. "what i replied wanting to do whatever made him happy.. "you" he said

softly "i said well you already have me" he smiled.

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He wrapped his arms around me and i was aware of ever single bit of his

body. god he was gorgeous i thought then i heard him reply why thank you.

wait i didn't say that out loud, then i looked at him his lips hadn't moved

either. oh my god he can hear me and i can hear him. that is so rare if only

read about it once. he chuckled in his beautiful silky voice. so i can hear

you and you can hear me i replied sweetly. yes he smiled. well then this

should be interesting i said out loud. he grinned and chuckled once again.

he started kissing my neck and i suddenly said "wait". what is it he said his

face still in my shoulder. "what is your name?" oh he answered. My name is

Ambrosie its french for immortal. "i smiled how very ironic i replied". "yes i

agree he said smileing." i know what other people call you but what is your

original name?" he asked "my name is Callidora it is the Greek name

meaning gift of beauty". "well it fits you perfectly" he said taking my face in

his hands. "yes my parents thought so too they studied Greek traits and

mythology". "um-hm" he mumbled. "you could just call me Calli like my

friends do if you want to" he looked at me then said" i shall not call u Calli i

will call u by your name because it tell the truth and fits you so well". i smiled

and if i could blush i more then likely would have. "Callidora im going to

have to teach you the ways of the immortal" "yes i knew you would i know

some things maybe that will help" "yes if they are true" he answered winking

at me.
PostPosted: Wed May 05, 2010 12:37 pm


Great job again! THis is an awesome second chapter and fits perfectly with the first.

WanderingThroughLife
Vice Captain

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