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Netherling

PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:20 pm


Optimistic and naive, The Fool has no idea where he is going. So busy daydreaming of what could be, he ignores what is. Thus he is led down to the grave by the one intelligent enough to use The Fool and not to be deceived by the trickery a Wise Man offers.



(c) me.

Not good at all. I was hoping to make it more intelligent sounding. I just wanted to save the idea. If you don't get it I understand. I'll explain it if you want.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:23 pm


You could make it so that a girl leads him down to his doom, ends up falling for him and takes his place in death to let him live. I dunno, just sputtering crap out here.

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Netherling

PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:24 pm


Emi Chinatsu
You could make it so that a girl leads him down to his doom, ends up falling for him and takes his place in death to let him live. I dunno, just sputtering crap out here.
I appreciate the idea, but this isn't a story line. It was supposed to be a wise sounding little blurb, but it sucks. V.V
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