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Me Against The World

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Clumsygirl2010

PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 5:05 pm


Me Against The World
Always there is someone in my face
some one to stop me to make my life misrible
and every time my back is to the wall and I cry
letting my feelings overwhelm me
I've let me feelings surround me
and still I'm depressed
I tried to run away from this darkness
I've tried venting my feelings
Nothing.....Nothing helps
This is the way its always has been
and always will be
its always me against the world

Not that great but a step up I guess any ideas on how I can write better
PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:40 pm


its good. know that there are friends and allys there to help you. even if you think there isn't.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:33 pm


me feeling to my feelings
and the line before that use the word feelings instead of feeling
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