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 Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:20 pm
These nine words...
When I first saw you
I was in love for the first time.
My heart felt full and my life was worry free.
You were the most beautiful and most caring girl I have ever met.
When I slept, I dreamed of you.
When I laughed, I thought of all the great, fun times we've had before.
I was with you through the goodtimes and bad.
You lended a hand and helped me when I truely needed it the most.
After many years and many months,
I was in love with you.
But I was too embarassed and nervous to admit it.
I was waiting for the perfect time to tell you,
But I waited too long.
You left and I didn't even say goodbye.
Now my heart remains broken
And my mind in shambles.
I never really knew what to tell you,
And I haven't thought about which words to use.
Though you are far away, I think about you.
Though we might live in different states or in different countries, we
live under the same sun and moon.
Much time has passed, enough for me to think of what to say.
I could say I love you, but that has been used way too many times.
I could say I adore you and admire you, but those are just simple words.
I may never know what words to say,
It might take months, it may take years.
But What I do know is that these words that I am about to say might
ring true.
Love is common to find...
True love is rare....
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:26 pm
so how is it??? first poem i ever wrote too. ((wait....))
edit: and fun fact:: i made this in 10 minutes at work. just saying. lol.
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:27 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:12 pm
so it is good?!? i was thinking of adding some more words to it. any suggestions for this or what i should so when i make other poems??
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