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 Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:22 pm
I am imprisoned in a cell of my own making the light only shines on the other side of the bars leaving me in perfect darkness alone and forgotten. I fell cold and I long for the touch of a stanger.
Though I get thown a bone every now and then like im some kind of animal and it dose make me happy. I realize i am still in the cage and I know I have to excape..
through the bars I walk though like a ghost that has just relized he can not be caged. and just like a ghost I am left empty and filled with sorrow looking once more for that which I have lost (love)
love from another, love for myself, love for a world that has enraged me to the point of breaking, and love for my pasions that I have seemed to have set aside.
I realize being happy in life only part of the time isnt a life sometimes you have to make yourself misrable to get to where you want to be.
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:31 pm
As I said, Im not a fan of poems...but you asked me to check it out, so here I am!
I must admit this is a little interesting to read. I cant judge poetry though, but if it means anything I do like it. Its different.
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:34 pm
hey im glad you read!! and since u dont read poems very much but you found it interesting that means alot. thanx agian XD
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:03 pm
It is a gift to express yourself in words that can transform something dark into something that releases a part of you soul, and that is what you did. Good Job, I Love It ! You have a gift.
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:26 pm
Um, your welcome lol. Id be glad to read or look at anything you aks me too.
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Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:03 pm
interesting and i completely agree with Papi80. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:14 pm
thank you imeepsh and papi you don't know how much that means to me to know my mesage is getting though in what I wright. that is exactly why I write them. And it makes me very happy that people like them thank you again for letting me know
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:05 pm
No problem James. 3nodding
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