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I would love for any writers here to share their stories with me! I myself am working on a book, but I don't know how to continue... I hope to have it typed up soon. You can find my progress in my journal, but keep in mind it is a fanfiction based on the anime Shugo Chara, with which I am obsessed. Please comment on my work with critique and tell me whether or not my writing is ameteurish, or just ameteur, or whatever.

... AAH! NOOOOO! I MUST HIDE MY WORK!!! DON'T LOOOOK!!

Yeah, one time I had a really cool dream, and before I forgot it I wrote it down. There wasn't much detail in what I wrote, though, so I'm making up a few parts while I read it. I was able to make an entire story out of that dream. And It was really weird because I had that dream while at a friend's house... Hooray for the random! whee

i'm writing a story, in fact, heres part of chapter 1. plz note i hav no name for the story yet, plz tell me if u like it, its the first story i'm everwritting that i'm showing people,and its not edited so please tell me what i can work on and what i should change in the story, oh and if u cant figure it out its told in first person. allies pov. and here brother is her twin brother

i stared ou tthe window watching as countryside turned to forest, then suburbia. we were moving again and i hated it. after about 10 minutes from entering the city again, we pulld up to a newly built 2 story house. my aunt stopped the car. "here we are, this is your new house."
i got out the car taking my suitcase and backpack out and setting it on the floor i go bak in and wake up my brother matt who was asleep in the back seat. he hated being woken up. "huh whats going on?" matt mumbled as i shook him awake.
"were at our new place, now wake up and get yout things so u can help get all your stuff inside, i swear you have more crap than i do, and i'm the girl here not you."i said. making sure he got up i went to the trunk and started taking out matt's bags. which were mainly filled with things music related. he could play almost any instument found in a rock band. guitar, bass, keyboard, drums, even the chello. hes musically talented and i could see him getting in a band if we didnt move so much.
matt finally dragged himself out of the car and grabed his bags and took them inside. i followed close behind him wanting to get my pick at the room i wanted. once we got inside we placed our bags at the door and went in different directions, matt has always wanted an attic for a bedroom. and i have always wanted a basement bedroom. i look around for the stairs that would lead to a but was left with disapointment i dragged myself upstairs and chose a room. matt had found what he was looking for and got the attic.
i didnt bother to unpack my things and went downstairs. my aunt cathy was calling in for pizza. so i ignored her and started exploring the house. opening and looking in all the doors. there must have been a million closets downstairs and only one bathroom, then one door was different from the others, it actually had a lock, i opened it and i couldn't believe it, stairs leading down to a basement. i walked down into it and looked around. it seemed bigger than the entire first floor and was covered in dust. i figured with a little extra work i can make this to be the best room ever, even if i would only have it for about a year.
i went back upstairs to get my bags and fi brough them down to my new room. there was a tiny window in the upper corner of the wall that let in enough light to see where i was going but if i wanted it could eaisly be coverd to keep my room pitch black. perfect for scary movies any time of the day.

I guess it's kinda too late to say this, school being over and all, but sorry, I didn't see you. Hehe... ... was I snoring?

I've actually been working on a new novel-ish fanfic, based on the Twilight Saga as well as The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner. Fred... yeah, I gave a minor character a background and a love life. But don't think I'm a regular Twilight fangirl. I'm trying to be very professional about it.
But I do want to see Stephanie Meyer. *shrieks* Yaaaah!!