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-Illicit remedy- Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:50 pm
Post your latest poems and if you are winner you will recieve gold:
1st Place:10,000
2nd Place: 5,000
Edited by Crimson o3o
The person who gets first place will also get the March 2010 Monthly Collectible ^^ That should "inspire" some ppl lol.
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:17 pm
My potatoe
My potatoe is my potatoe
My poptart is my poptart
Touch my potatoe or poptart
And I will shank you in the toe.
~a really short piece for breakfast table humor~
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 6:27 pm
Can we post Haikus??
cause i dont think you wanna read a full poem by me
nor do i want to submit all of you to that kind of torture
having to read my poems gonk
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:13 pm
I wish I could reverse the bullets
That took you away from me.
But your blood is on the ground
And now you and I will never be.
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Crimson Rebel Ghost Captain
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Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 9:06 pm
Is it still on?
Drifting high into the sky, spreading your cause
Seeping into the pores, the nose, the eyes, the skin
Coming in with each breath and out with the other
Your smell intoxicates my mind with thoughts of hate
As a drag is taken and inhaled into the lungs
Your poison takes hold and makes people love
You yet hate you with a deadly passion
Yet you caress their needs with stinging chemical kisses
Damning them with your love
Look in any store and there you will see
The unattended drug that takes about 3
Million with cancer and diseases well known
Yet many more pay and suck on your love
Knowing the fate that awaits
Why is it that all the other killers
Meth, crack, angel, weed, heroin, pcp
Are banned by the law
Yet this killer dances in front of our faces
Over our heads
Behind our backs
And inside our bodies
Taking more than any of those drugs have the right to brag about
For this one is legal and watches
As others get busted and are shut out
It smiles in their faces as the body count rises
It does not discriminate
Black, white, skinny, fat, young, old, short, tall
It loves to kill and will kill all
For this is an unattended drug that grips you with sweet words
A euphoria that takes you high and releases your mind
Yet ultimately takes it away into the dark abyss of death
And many have tried to lay it down to rest
But it rises like the undead
And what have we done?
Nothing but encourage this killer of man
Puff, breathe, puff, suck, blow, spreading the poison
Of this unattended drug
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Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 1:42 am
idk o.o lou lou aint said nuthin bout it lately o-o
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Crimson Rebel Ghost Captain
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-Illicit remedy- Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 1:54 pm
This marks my true desire...
It awakens my most erotic ways of thinking...
This craving I cannot escape...strong lust fulfilling fantasies flow through mind as my intentions come into view...
Its enticing...
Im drawn to it in every sense of being...
Captivated my admiration and longing for it begins to reach new heights...
This is truely remarkable it escapes the desperation of a rebellious and isolated dream...
I wish not to flee from it but for it to take control of my all...
If i cannot possess it I beg you let me experience it...even if for a moment...
It isnt like anything youve ever seen..its marked by elegance and can only be spoken of only by few..
To capture it..who knows if thats possible....to cherish it will be a most....
To let it slip away will cause you unfortunate grief...
He is it...
My one true desire...
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 6:04 pm
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-Illicit remedy- Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 8:52 pm
ok i think i'll try mrgreen
when u die i will cry
if i am late i hope you will wait
so i can see you smile for your last while
but if im to late it won't be great
i'll be there for a while just remebering your smile
and be sad because your were so glad
and i was always mad and that was not rad
so be happy that it was a nappy
and your next to the one you love
well thats all i got so i hope u like it ^_^
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