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 Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:44 am
From the mind of that who is lost,
I'm scrambled, beaten, and tossed,
From one direction to the other,
I don't feel as if I'm together,
One thing after another penetrates my mind,
All I hope is to find,
the truth, the truth I seek,
for me, I am weak...
Even hope is hopeless,
how'd i get myself in this mess,
There is no fate for me,
Cause' I'm a contradiction to be,
Tell me my future, please,
It'll be nothing but a tease,
Cause' I am who I am,
I can garuntee that's no sham.
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Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:59 pm
Perfect and imperfect rhyme scheme makes a very well done poem. Most verses are trochaic pentameters, I like it!
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Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:12 pm
Great poem! It's a bit heart sickening but I'm addicted 2 reading that kind of stuff. lol
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:23 pm
thankies! =) and i just learned the most common rhyme scheme during english this past week...and i made this poem awhile ago...and yes, most of my poems r rather heart-sickening, so to put it...but they're from the depths of which my mind can reach! =)
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