Welcome to Gaia! ::

Active Writers

Back to Guilds

Active writers of all sorts are welcome 

Tags: poetry, writing, stories, songs, books 

Reply Songs...Songs...Songs...And More Songs!!
This Aint Fair By: ME!

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

ll B r i g h t ll

PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:05 pm


Every day i look my best just for you,
you don't understand how much i love you.
i put my all in just for you to recognize,
love like this will never fade until i die

This aint fair, don't wanna get hurt no more
gotta be prepared to get locked outside your door
trying not to care seems so hard when your always there
this aint fair, i gotta let you know...

i love you it seems quite hard to say
when all you do is laugh and leave me in shame
i sit down and start thinking of you
wondering if you spend one min thinking of me to

This aint fair, don't wanna get hurt no more
gotta be prepared to get locked outside your door
trying not to care seems so hard when your always there
this aint fair, i gotta let you know...

Every day i look my best just for you,
you don't understand how much i love you.
i put my all in just for you to recognize,
love like this will never fade until i die

This aint fair, don't wanna get hurt no more
gotta be prepared to get locked outside your door
trying not to care seems so hard when your always there
this aint fair, i gotta let you know...
This aint fair anymore.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:02 am


I'm not big with love songs, but this one is really good. Your wording flow pretty good. Great job!

Fire of the Candle

Friendly Phantom

6,800 Points
  • Tycoon 200
  • Invisibility 100
  • Informer 100
Reply
Songs...Songs...Songs...And More Songs!!

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
//
//

// //

Have an account? Login Now!

//
//