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A quick haiku

SpookySushi658
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:04 pm

in the summer sun
squirrels dance and play around
it is so awesome

(i know its pretty lame but the poetry section looked bare)
tell me what yall think.

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:33 am

giggle thats really cute

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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:15 am

needs a little more but keep working on it. it is cute.

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:56 am

James255

needs a little more but keep working on it. it is cute.

lol cant really add more its a haiku biggrin
have to keep with the 5-7-5 format
but i do admit it isnt the best (im not poetically inclined)

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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 4:57 pm

ahhh ok well there is the thing i forgot what a haiku was in that case for what you had to work with it is realy good. I mean that too.

Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:26 pm

I saw a squirrel!
N it was doing like dis..
-imitates squirrel-

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