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The Phoenix Rises Again

PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:18 pm


So I'm writing a Hunchback of Notre Dame fic (Disney).

I have a character named Gaetane. She managed to get a job as Frollo's assistant in disguise as a boy.

However, unbeknownst to her for a long time, her mother married Clopin. Because of this, her status in life dropped significantly as she is now a daughter of a gypsy. This gave one of Frollo's rivals ample opportunity to force him to fire her.

In the end, I want her, Clopin, Esmeralda (who has by now married Frollo) and her mother to be in acceptance as to the situation. Her mother wants a daughter who can be/is married, and Esmeralda doesn't like Gaetane's attitude towards her because she suspects Esmeralda of being shallow and mean.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:43 pm


I don't exactly understand the question. Is there a character fault that you are wondering about?

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:33 am


Just keep going with how you're doing >.> It sounds like a lovely story to me. It will turn out just fine, I'm sure ^^
PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 11:19 am


I'm wondering how to end it after Gaetan gets fired.

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