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Vinney Rivers

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 6:20 pm


Shun
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Age
17

Nation
Fire

Home Town
Fire Nation's Harbor City

Element
Fire

Occupation
Rouge

Fighting Style
Shun's fighting style is quick and fluent.He uses his fire mostly as a distraction and then strikes with his katana.Shun is sure to keep silent and control his breathing,he also studies the oponents movements in battle.

Skill Level
Medium-High

Starter Inventory
Shun is equiped with a red katana with a black rose carved into it.The sheath is also black but with a red rose painted on it.He wears one cloaks with a hood attached to it,the cloak is held in place with a long orange sheath and a strand of string with three golden rings one it.Shun wears a thin white sleveless jump suit under the cloaks and small paddings on his legs and arms.There is one necklace with a red daimond on the end and multiple red bracelets on his body.Shun uses a yellow strand of string to keep his hair in place with golden beads on the ends of a few strands of hair.Shun has a long red tatoo across his face and two small triangles under his right eye.For traveling reasons,Shun keeps a tan bag with a string on it attached to the back of his suit under his cloak.To top it all off Shun keeps a lite chest armor on,three daggers under his leg paddings,and straw sandles.


Bio
Shun was born in raised in the Fire Nation's Harbor City where he and his older brother trained in the fire bending and swordsmen arts.Shun was pretty good with his training but wanted more power.When his brother told him that he could no longer train due to his love of power,Shun faught his brother and nearly killed him,afterwards,Shun left in fear of being captured or killed.From there on,Shun vouled to get stronger then even the gods,no matter how many he killed,no matter how many miles it took,he was confident that he would get the power he wanted.However,due to his life style,Shun was lonely and lived in darkness,and anger,he alowed nobody to get close to him,Shun believed nobody could be trusted.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:25 pm


Ahem. A few things. Please describe the fighting style more.
"Swift and fluent", dosen't really say anything, y'know?

Also, describe your starter inventory,"Everything in the picture", dosen't really say much. Someone may not see something thats in the picture. Lastly, change your Skill Level Medium-High. Can't have everyone being "High", in skill level, y'know.

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Hinote Tosatsu

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:37 pm


Another thing would be your back-story. I don't think we've had a massive assault on Fire like the one you described. If that had happened, we'd most likely need to reference it. As it currently stands the nations have been at peace for a great while. Though that is subject to change.

And, as Kaze said, we have too many high levels already.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 9:18 pm


Oh the bio was made up,didn't know it had to be based on the guild,and the rest can change.
I changed it.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:08 pm


Accepted!
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