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 Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 5:28 pm
PLEASE DON'T LAUGH
LOVE
It burns,
It stings,
It hurts,
It kills,
It mends,
It saves,
Love can be deadly,
It can kill,
It can burn,
It can sting.
Love can be a blessing,
It can mend,
It can save,
It can motivate,
It's time to live,
Take a risk,
a chance,
Don't run from love,
It can be good or bad,
Take it and hope,
Let your feelings go,
and live a life.
The end
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:03 am
Hanyuu Furude Higurashi PLEASE DON'T LAUGH LOVE It burns, It stings, It hurts, It kills, It mends, It saves, Love can be deadly, It can kill, It can burn, It can sting. Love can be a blessing, It can mend, It can save, It can motivate, It's time to live, Take a risk, a chance, Don't run from love, It can be good or bad, Take it and hope, Let your feelings go, and live a life. The end cute 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:47 pm
yeah, it's great.
(also, i wasn't on yesterday or earlier, internet here suck's major. so fixing it. lol?)
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:54 pm
Thats actually not my best poem, just a fav
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:55 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:36 pm
i think it's kinda cheesy
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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:56 pm
everybody likes cheese though
especially with crackers 3nodding
i could relate with it, i liked it
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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 8:36 pm
dang. now i want cheese and crackers. We have lots of cheese, but no crackers.
Anyways. It was good for a beginner like you. But, just for future reference, try to be a little deeper and try to get the point across to people. Just a couple of pointers, no biggie, but otherwise, you did pretty good.
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:39 pm
meh it's one of my worst poems to be honest
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 3:07 pm
 We're born alone, we live alone, we die alone.
Only through our love and friendship....
I like it, It's beautiful. It shows what Love really is and can do to a person. It's painful but we long for Love.
Here's one of mine (It's kinda short.)...
"To see the world in a grain of sand,
And eternity in an hour.
Hold the world in the palm of your hand,
And gaze into the midnight shower.."
... can we create the illusion for the moment
that we're not alone. - Orson Welles
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:53 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:41 pm
sadly true.... but other times necesseary if you truely love your significint other...
(idk why i thought this, and there might be some spelling mistakes but, ehh, who cares.)
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:20 am
...ya it's too true.
What do you think our oarents did or do (depending on age and if they aare alive ect) for us?
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:38 pm
idk, maybe differently than me or something.
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:39 pm
you shoul=d join my guild
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