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 Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:31 pm
Esan continued to walk, he had his walking stick in his hand. It's been a month since he started walking, he continued to practice kendo as well. As he walked, he heard something behind him. He quickly turned, and from the dark, came a small goblin like creature. He lunged its sharp claws at Esan, Esan quickly slashed his walking stick down on its head. Sending it slamming into the ground. Its bright green eyes were about the only thing Esan could see about it. It stared at Esan, and Esan stared back. Esan tried to keep from trembling, he took a kendo stance and awaited the goblin to attack. A small chuckle came from it, it stood on its two legs and looked up at Esan. "Good reflects for a human." Said the small goblin, rubbing its bruised head. "I came here to feast, and I've found a warrior instead!" Esan just scratched his head, the goblin was in tattered, loose clothing. About as big as a cat, though no fur.
"Umm, what exactly are you?" Asked Esan, he kept his guard up. The goblin sat down.
"Trust me human, I don't intend on eating you anymore." Esan lowered his guard, for some reason he trusted it. "I'm a goblin, of a world filled with mystical objects!" Said the goblin, he seemed proud. "I'm Graahk, head goblin to his majesty, FubukiT, and the queen, Becca." Esan just continued to scratch his head, he couldn't believe whats happening right now, he was talking with something that resembled a large frog in clothing with claws! Esan looked at his stick, he slammed the stick into his foot. Trying to wake himself of the dream. Graahk grunted, "you humans are so stupid, this isn't a dream..." Graahk looked around, "Well, I must be on my way, with strange dark creatures appearing outisde the kingdom, the king may need me!" Graahk opened a portal, the portal glew green, a small blue dot in the middle of it. Graahk turned to Esan, "You coming?"
"What?! I can't go! My parents will worry and everything!" Replied Esan, he wanted to go so bad.
Graahk shook his head, he walked over to Esan. "Your coming with me, we need all the warriors we can get. You don't look to skillful, but you'll be of some use." Said Graahk, tugging on Esan's shoe. Esan fell over, the goblin had amazing strength! He dragged Esan into the portal, once they enter. All around Esan were strange tie-die colors, resembling a lava lamb. Esan stood up in it, he just looked around in awe. The goblin shook his head, "You humans...you don't even know about interdimmensional travel..." Suddenly there was a bright flash, and Esan found himself on a bridge. The bridge led to a giant kingdom. Magnificent tapestry hung from outside the castle.
"Are those tapestry's glowing?" Asked Esan, puzzled by the aura surrounding them.
"Yep! Enchanted protection talismens! I did it myself!" Replied Graahk proudly, he held his head high and began to walk towards the castle, Esan followed. They walked through the palace halls, knights watched. Confused that a human was brought here. Graahk opened two giant doors with ease. He walked in to the throne room. Esan looked at the king and queen. The king had strange clothing on, the clothing was light armor. It didn't look like it could stop a sword or bullet. The queen was next to him, in a white dress. They both looked human. They both were surrounded by aura. They looked at Esan, they had a puzzled look. "This is a human that goes by the name of Esan! He shows potential! I request for the 100 door training!" Said Graahk, he looked serious now. Esan tried to think of what he meant by the 100 door training.
"This human doesn't look special...but if you suggest this then fine." Said FubukiT, his hand began to glow, the floor beneath Esan opened up and Esan fell into a pitch black room. He found a sword next to him, lanterns lit up throughout the room. It was empty, with only one door at the end.
"WHY DID YOU DO THAT!?" Yelled Esan, shaking his fist up at the slowly closing hole. Graahk looked down.
"Good look!" Shouted Graahk, with a small wave.
"Good luck? With what..." Esan suddenly heard the sound of something breathing loudly. He looked over, five pitch black wolves eyed him. Their growl loud and fierce. Esan jumped back at the sight of them. He picked up the sword and stared at them. They slowly moved closer...
Too be continued! XD
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:35 pm
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Sean Banned -Mob City- Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 6:52 pm
Great story, plot wise, to little to tell how it will look. I believe this has real potential, just need more. I love how you have action right from the beginning, my books never do, they start out covering each character, introducing them. Setting up little conflicts that lead to a larger conflict, but yet I usually falter along the middle, because I need more action. Here I am though rambling on about my work, bravo dude. I've seen better, but I've seen much worse. Again though this is only the beginning of what could be an epic series, or a single book.
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:43 pm
It might be good to have another human here." Said Becca, relaxing. "There aren't many real humans here." Becca stood up, she began to walk to the royal kitchen. FubukiT stood up, and power swirled around him, he then vanished. He reappeared next to Becca, they both walked through the palace halls. Guards at each side. The guards resembled humans, but weren't from the other world.
"Maybe." Replied FubukiT, guards eyed them. They were paranoid of the dark creatures that would attack the kingdom. "We have been looking for another human companion to travel with us. Only real humans can harness the full power of the Elemental Gems..." Graahk followed them, he was curious at what they planned. "What shall we have?" Asked FubukiT to Becca, as they walked into the kitchen.
Esan backed up as the wolves closed in. Esan had a tight grip on the sword, he took a stance. A wolf dashed towards him, and jumped. Esan just closed his eyes and slashed forward. He heard something drop to the ground, he opened his eyes to see the Shadow Wolf dead at his feet. Strange dark liquad dripped from his sword. The wolf and the liquid evaporated. Esan looked at the other wolves, which have now circled him. Esan held his sword high, another Shadow Wolf lunged at him, Esan was able to stay calm and slashed at it, its claws left a small cut on Esan's arm. Esan put his hand over the cut, it was stinging horribly. The wolf's claws are barbed! Esan looked around, the other Shadow Wolves all jumped at once at him. Esan dashed to the side, slashing through one while the others barely missed. Esan ran at one, stabbing it. The last one was able to get close and Esan jumped back. The wolf suddenly stood on it's two hind legs. Esan stared at it, amazed. The wolf ran at him, barraging him with slashes. Esan blocked off some, but continued to get scratched. Esan ducked and thrusted his sword forward. Stabbing it, it shattered. Like broken glass. Above the door appeared a light green glowing one. Esan ran at the door, it was locked. He heard growling, behind him were now ten wolves, all standing on their back legs. Esan fought them off, evading and blocking. He kept slashing at them, taking them down one by one. He lunged his sword into the last wolf. It dissolved. The one aboved the door changed to a two. Esan groaned, "They is going to take forever...Why didn't I get a choice in this?!"
FubukiT and Becca sat at a large dining table, covered in white cloth. The food smelled fresh. They ate and then began to start another conversation. "How do you think Esan's doing?" Asked Becca. She put down the bone she picked clean.
"Who knows." Replied FubukiT, "I guess I should check on him." FubukiT stood up, and blue aura swirled around him. He appeared in the chamber standing on a wall, ignoring gravity. Esan didn't have time to look, he was fending off strange ork creatures. He continued to dodge their flying maces. "How ya doing?" Asked FubukiT. Esan was startled and looked over, he saw FubukiT standing on a wall.
"How are you doing that?" Asked Esan, puzzled. The orks mace, hit Esan's hand, causing the sword to skid from his hand into a corner. Esan's eye twitched. "You distracted me! Now I have no weapon!" Yelled Esan, evading each mace that swung at him.
FubukiT sighed, "It's your own fault, you need a better grip!" Esan muttered something and rolled over to his sword, he lunged it into the ork. It fell over, dissolving before it hit the ground. The other ork ran at him, Esan continued to guard against it. "Your not getting too far..." Said FubukiT, looking over the to door, above was a two. FubukiT teleported back to Becca, and they began to talk about their plan for the Elemental Gems.
"Why did he leave me down here?!" Yelled Esan, slashing his sword at the flying mace. Slicing it in two. Esan jumped and stabbed the sword through the ork. It suddenly disappeared, above the door appeared a three. "Ugh."
"Do you think Esan will survive?" Asked Becca, as she began to lay out the map of Grundor, the area they're in.
"I wouldn't bet on it." Replied FubukiT, looking at the map. Tons of shining gems were marked on the map. "Quite a few Elemental Gems. Which will we go after first?"
"Well, it seems there's one close by the kingdom. It seems to be guarded though..." Said Becca, pointing to a near by swamp. Habited by a rogue clan of skillful goblins.
"How annoying..." Replied FubukiT. "We should be able to take them easily, but we have to restrict our power, so we don't accidently destroy to hidden Elemental Gem there..." FubukiT scratched his head. "But I guess we should wait for Esan to finish the 100 door training... If he survives it."
"So I guess a good nights rest and we check on him tomorrow morning?" Said Becca, rolling up the map. She and FubukiT walked to the master bedroom, and relaxed.
"Wonder if he'll survive the night." Said FubukiT, almost jokingly.
TOO BE CONTINUED! XD
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I-CrissXApplesauce-I Crew
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:43 am
hahaha you...you copy and paste-er!!
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:49 am
yep XD i'm not gonna make a whole new story, so i'm just taking it from Burning Wills in fubs guild until i make it to where i left off, then i'll add the updates XD
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