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Rags of Ash

PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:18 am


my latest:

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Any critique is appreciated and welcomed!
PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:25 pm


I can't really find anything bad... maybe squarer shoulders but that's what I like with big biceps like he's super ripped. kidding it's all about the style and yours works well as it is.
Love it.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 12:25 am




i love the style. being able to work with just black and white like that is amazing.

the only things i'd point out is that the face looks a little small for his head and a little flat compared to the detail of everything else.

also, the way his shirt it bunched makes it seem like it is cut that short in the front and that he isnt pulling it up as much as he is.

does that make sense? lol
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:56 am


Ava Amore


i love the style. being able to work with just black and white like that is amazing.

the only things i'd point out is that the face looks a little small for his head and a little flat compared to the detail of everything else.

also, the way his shirt it bunched makes it seem like it is cut that short in the front and that he isnt pulling it up as much as he is.

does that make sense? lol


rofl that does make sense and now that I look at it...it does look that way sweatdrop xd oops rofl

You know, I KNEW there was something messed up with his face. It just didn't gel with the rest. arrgglenarf.

I do love black and white. Thank you for point out those icky bits!! It's very appreciated!

Rags of Ash



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PostPosted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 1:22 pm


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The only things that bother me about this is the shape of his ear and the angle of his eye brows.
His ear looks a bit ... odd. Almost elfen, but with not enough detail.
And his eye brows seem a little too inward inclined. And the angle also makes it look like they might be too far up on his fore head.
Other than those two things, it's amazing.
Looks like it's straight out of a manga. biggrin
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