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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 7:09 pm
Welcome to boot camp, Grix style. The camp takes place on Earth, in a dusty patch of ground that has been set aside for specilized training.
You will start your training by posting you arriving at the camp via bus, getting out and standing at attention for the drill instructors. Your character will make these posts and even if you are a higher rank than the instructor, here, their word is law.
It is very hot and dry, there is a central, two floor concrete office building for the officers and trainers. On either side of the camp are rows of large blocklike builings for holding the trainies. The drill instructors here are brutal, expect no simpathy, no remorse, regardless of rank. Until you have passed this, you are all Privates. Now get out there and prove that you arn't usless packs of meat.
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:35 am
Nick got off the bus as he looked at the camp he shook his head walking up seeing a man at attention. he dropped his bag and stood at attention in front of him
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:39 am
Dean took a step off the bus and took a step next to Nick. Dean saw Grix and snapped into a salute as well.
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 2:54 pm
Patrick Ryan Boot Camp First day of school
Patrick stumbled off the bus after several other recruits. He was glad to be out of there, for it had been cramped and stuffy.He followed the others' example and stood in a line, though did not stand as straight as he should have. He gave the guy he supposed was the instructor a lazy salute.
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 3:17 pm
(Assassin and Criminal, you are not to post here until you post in the "Post here to begin training" thread.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 3:28 pm
splaser Patrick Ryan Boot Camp First day of school Patrick stumbled off the bus after several other recruits. He was glad to be out of there, for it had been cramped and stuffy.He followed the others' example and stood in a line, though did not stand as straight as he should have. He gave the guy he supposed was the instructor a lazy salute. (There were no spelling or grammar errors, though you are purposely making me have to yell at you...Try to make your posts at least two paragraphs, I want to improve your writing, not just pass you because I can.) Major Grixanald Belonov Head Drill instructor Test camp, Alpha.Grix watched as the recruits filled of the bus, tired, lazy and not even attempting to impress the drill instructor. Grix had been given explicit orders to do whatever is necessary to drill these men, given the freedom to train as he pleased. Growling he walked in front of the group and fired his Magnum into he air. "RECRUITS!! TEN' SHUN!!!!"Now that he had all of their attentions, he started to walk down the lines like a primal beast waiting for a kill; he was just waiting for someone to slip up. When he saw Patrick, he was enraged. He walked over and slapped the soldier's saluting hand away. "Comrade, do you have any common sense? You NEVER salute your drill instructor unless explicitly asked! Now stand straight as a board and list off your name and place of birth before I kill you myself!"
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 5:21 pm
Recruit Patrick Ryan Test Camp, Alpha I am screwed
Patrick, startled by the instructor's extremely loud voice, stood up as straight as he possibly could. His eyes were wide with terror as the instructor glared at him.
"Patrick Ryan, Sir! New Manila,Mars,Sir!" he exclaimed.
The dry breeze that began to blow deposited dust in Patrick's eyes. His eyes began to water, but he was too scared of Grix to rub them. The drill instructor seemed satisfied for the moment, so Patrick tried to take deep breaths to quiet his racing heart.
This guy scares the crap out of me, thought Patrick, I better straighten up fast, or risk being berated more. Durt told me not to worry about boot camp, that it wasn't that bad. He's full of s**t.
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:48 am
(Alright good post, now you may NPC or puppet one other person for this exercise, your going to be running, alot)
Major Grixanald Belonov Head Drill instructor Test camp, Alpha.
Grix grinned as the recruit stated his name and place of birth; Grix had always been told he had a way with people. Cracking his neck, Grix went down the line, gathering the names and places of birth from the rest of the recruits. Apparently, they had learned from Partrick and didn't slip up. Looking up at the sky, Grix could feel the burning weight of the sun pouring down, perfect day for a morning jog.
"Alright you miserable mudaks! You are going for a nice long run, two miles out, two miles back, open desert! GO GO GO!"
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:10 am
Recruit Patrick Ryan Test Camp, Alpha Running? No problem
As soon as Grix ordered them to begin their run, Patrick was in the front of the pack. As they ran, he realized he wouldn't know when they had reached two miles. The path they were taking was hardly a path at all. Worse, the area was covered in cacti and the ground was pock-marked with snake holes.
Whatever, he thought, I'll just let these guys figure it out.
A man, Mike, Patrick thought his name was; was running alongside Patrick. Mike was smaller in build then the other recruits, but was apparently faster than them because of it.
"My name's Patrick." "I know. Mike." "You're pretty fast. I did track in high school, so that's why I am." "Watch this!", shouted Mike as he sped up, jumped over a thorny bush, and landed on his feet.
"Nice mate." said Patrick in response to his comrade's feat.
The heat of the day began to wear on the recruits. They were all sweaty and low on breath when Mike finally told them to turn around. They ran as quickly as they could back towards camp. When they finally arrived, Patrick, Mike, and a few others were fine. Others were wheezing, and had to sit down, being that worn out.
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 2:27 pm
(Alright sorry for the inactivity, your passed SPlazer, you have proven you can take basic orders and paragraph if needed. Welcome to the "A" team.)
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 2:33 pm
Recruit, Nick Mercer Boot camp, entrance Introduction
Nick sat in the bus thinking as he heard the bus skid to a stop. "Here we are" he got up grabbing his bag flinging it over his shoulder.
He walked off the bus into the blistering heat Just great He walked forward seeing a man at attention dropping his bag standing in line quickly saluting his form firm as he looked forward
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 3:57 pm
recruit, undead boot camp drop off intro
undead got off the buss. looked around. spit put his hands in his pockets and got in line. when the instructor came to him. he gave a sloppy salute.
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Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 5:13 pm
If I was still a DI, I would have cut off your eyelids, fed them to you, casturated you with a rusty spoon then had your body eaten by ants for having such a horrid post. Luckily, you will just get off with public humiliation. Put more then two ******** seconds into your posts! Your either 3 or you care nothing about RPing.
If any of you want to know why I stopped teaching people, look at Tylerbaustin's post. Nuff said.
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 4:09 pm
after thinking to himself undead decided to fly right. and was ordered to report to the barracks. for they were told they had a big day tomoro
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 6:21 pm
its 3 in the morning. undead is grabbed out of his bed... he is thrown out of the barracks and on to the ground by a commanding officer. he is screamed at for not putting 2 seconds in to his post. and then is told to go run.
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