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michaelmm3

PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:13 pm


Ticktock goes the clock, I'll be dead, before bed …

Ticktock goes the clock, as my heart slowly cracks bigger and bigger
Ticktock goes the clock, when you hug me tight and you kiss my forehead
Ticktock goes the clock, one last time… before I say goodbye


But the hands on the clock, wont move...

Because I love you
PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:32 pm


8D WOOF
Ticktock goes the clock, I'll be dead, before bed …

Ticktock goes the clock, as my heart slowly cracks bigger and bigger
Ticktock goes the clock, when you hug me tight and you kiss my forehead
Ticktock goes the clock, one last time… before I say goodbye


But the hands on the clock, wont move...

Because I love you



I love it, it is really emotional T-T It makes me want to sob

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:15 am


I think its great the way it is!
PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:48 am


Oh okay ^-^ ty

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