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"Forever Love" {Asked Myself: Why haven't I made a song?!}

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xXxThe_Lady_Of_ChaosxXx

PostPosted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 11:57 pm


"Forever"


Created By: The Lady Of Chaos


[Intro]
Time passes by, so slowly
I can’t stand not knowing
When we’ll be together
Our love will last forever…

Each night I dream you
And what our love has been through
We pass each test we take
And our love will never break
Each night you dream me
And what our love can truly be
I can’t live without my love
For you’re who I’m dreaming of
Our love will last until…


[Chorus]
Forever, Forever, Forever, is for how long
Forever, Forever, Forever, is for how long
Destiny has brought us together
Our love will last forever..
Forever, Forever, Forever, that’s how long
Forever, Forever, Forever, until I’m gone.

Never doubt what’s inside of you
I feel alive because of you
You are my living dream
You show me what love should be
My place is by your side
Right there I’d love to hide
Hide and become your bride
Bride of your’s I’d love to stay
Until the end of days, until…


[Repeat Chorus]
Forever, Forever, Forever, is for how long
Forever, Forever, Forever, is for how long.
Destiny brought us together
Our love will last forever…
Forever, Forever, Forever, that’s how long
Forever, Forever, Forever, until I’m gone..


Background and Feed Back?


This song is the first song I have ever created, I am more skilled in Creative Writing and Novel Creations, but this I decided to try, because I am in a Romantic Mood, because of my soon to be "marriage" I would love to hear your feed back

Sooo? How did I do for my first song?


Much Love
Lady Sorina
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:49 am


thats really good!

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xXxThe_Lady_Of_ChaosxXx

PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:57 am


Sarah aka Vampire Girl
thats really good!


~♥~Much Thanks~♥~


Do you really like it?
 
PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 11:53 am


it makes me think. i like it but the thought behind it is different. what i see is someone asking question to themselves. Very good. i like it a lot. very well written.

xiix_Lilliane_xiix


xXxThe_Lady_Of_ChaosxXx

PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:02 pm


Xion Tsume
it makes me think. i like it but the thought behind it is different. what i see is someone asking question to themselves. Very good. i like it a lot. very well written.


Interesting...


I am glad you liked it, I always enjoy your comments. The song is basically a love song about being away from my lover T-T
 
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