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 Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:44 pm
The memories that I still have of my past life are now faint and blurry images. All that I do remember is how I became the way I am today, and that’s the one thing I wish I could forget, but no matter what I do just cant seem to. The images of what he did to me are still imbedded into my mind, and it’s been thirteen years since this horrific event took place. It only seems fair to tell you what happened that dreadful October day, but beware, this is no joke. You don’t have to believe me, most you probably won’t, but there are things in this world that make the worst of your nightmares seem pitiful. And I, Elizabeth McAllen, am warning you of them now, so maybe you won’t end up like me.
tell me watcha think =]
I also need help with a title. =] so please help lol.
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Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:09 am
sounds like a good story to read
i can help with the title
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Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:34 am
WElll, what do you have in mind?
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:34 pm
well first off...cheye sireusly your driveing me nuts here let me read the story! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!!!!
and 2nd thing on the agenda WOO UNSC ROOKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW I GOT SOME ONE TO GO ALL NERD WITH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and 3rd...with out knowing more of the story its kinda hard but my sigestion's "Sin's of the past" "Warning of the futcher"
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:46 pm
sounds great cant wait to read it lol hope it goes well lol if you need help wit anything let me kno
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:48 pm
1: mwahahahah,! U shall not be able to read it until i get at least 2 pages done.
2: Unsc rookie's name is Mark. And have fun with ur going-nerd plan xp
3: Fine I'll post more, ....If i can find it in the maze of lost files on my computer
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:06 pm
When you said "this" horrific event, it sounded more like she was a narrator... But the story sounds good so far, you should post more of it, I'd like to read it.
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