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Profitable Conversationalist
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 Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:03 pm
Broken Glasswork Heart
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Why am I rendered mute by your presence?
Why does your face stop my words?
Why am I reduced to writing silent pleas?
When you will never read them anyway
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Why do I still write for you?
When your heart belongs to another
Why do I delude myself?
When I am obviously out matched
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Why does my heart sing out?
Why can you not hear my song?
With a heart this heavy
Can a man die of heart ache?
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Why can I not look you in the eyes?
Am I afraid you would spy my weakness?
Afraid to but my fear in front of the curtain
Center stage, spotlight on
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How do you see me?
Do you see me as the man I am?
Or do you take me at face value?
Please look beneath the skin to see the broken glasswork heart you gave me.
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 8:44 am
It's like I'm seeing a reflection of myself from the other day. O.o Nice job! I liked the smoothness of it and how you made me think more within the poem. ^^
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Alustrial777 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 11:43 am
This poem is amazing. It's what it's been like for me with this guy I like.
Very nice job. 3nodding
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