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 Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 4:36 pm
Hey,
I like writing stories and novels, but I write some poetry too. These are some funny little poems I made up one night.
Calvin Clanome
Calvin Clanome,
Was always at home.
He never left bed,
So surely he was dead.
Madame Crutter
Madame Crutter,
Ate peanut butter.
She choked at died,
And everyone cried.
Tall Paul
Tall Paul,
Had a fight with a doll.
He came out bad,
And was really sad.
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Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 3:07 pm
I think they're cute! Well, besides the fact that they are all sad or dead, but still, they're cute in their own special way!
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 5:59 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 7:22 am
Tee hee.. They remind me of the dirty lymerics my grandmother rhymes off every now and again.
One thing I'll say, though, is don't post under a subject like "You probably won't want to read..." if you're looking for feedback, because that just makes people not want to read them. The poems are silly, albeit a bit morbid (which there is nothing wrong with. you should read some of my stuff!), but they're not dumb.
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The Bookwyrm Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 10:11 am
Gypsy Blue Tee hee.. They remind me of the dirty lymerics my grandmother rhymes off every now and again.
One thing I'll say, though, is don't post under a subject like "You probably won't want to read..." if you're looking for feedback, because that just makes people not want to read them. The poems are silly, albeit a bit morbid (which there is nothing wrong with. you should read some of my stuff!), but they're not dumb. Thanks, this was the first I posted and I felt a little wierd posting my work because I never, ever share my poetry with anyone. I'll change the title.
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Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 3:45 pm
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The Bookwyrm Vice Captain
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