My songspoems what you think members???

[xXxThe_Lady_Of_ChaosxXx]

Eddie The Mexi Can Do

I keep on trying and it feels like I'm dying
Deep inside I am crying
Showing my fears let alone my tears
Trying to let it show, letting it go
Watching it go, did I waste it all?
Loving you and all n forgetting them all
I keep on trying, not letting our love fall
Putting it in a ball to show it all
So you can see my thoughts n seeing me fall
Does it wound you at all?
Did it hurt at all? Leaving me and all?
I said you are my all, I meant it all.
Standing tall with you in my arms
I'm not letting you fall or
Letting you go cuz I'm different from them all
I keep on trying and loving you as long as I can try
Loving you is all
All I need is for you to show it all
Stop hiding it all
Don't let me fall...

~♥~Impressive~♥~

I am quite touched with this poem. It is emotional for you I can tell. Most of my most powerful works are made when the emotion is real. Keep up the good work, hun. Best of luck during the future.