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Very good descriptions. I can really see it.

I'm a little lost on the title's reference to crying...I kept expecting your lost love to pop up and throw a snowball at me or something. If you're merely anthropomorphizing the weather, I'd suggest something less emotionally charged.

I think that the title is good, but if you plan to keep it you should add something about the snowflakes melting and flowing down the face like tears.
Also, I think two 'far's would be enough.
As Mark Twain said, every time to want to write the word very, put 'damn' in it's place so your editor will take it out. It's the same idea in that extra words take away from the work rather than add to it.
Overall, I think you captured the imagery quite well, and wish it was longer. That might be something you should consider doing, extending this work because it's quite good and has lots of potential.